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Bbeef
8/9/20, 7:39 PM
really a cool one!
8/9/20, 6:11 PM
I'm doing well but I've gotten a bit busy with other things. Hope you all are safe and sound too
8/9/20, 6:10 PM
Hey team, glad to see peole are still reading this. I'm slowly inching towards a new release to this story (with a heavy focus on the Chief). I've been hit by a sudden case of writer's block though. To the newest anon, and anyone else out there, if you want to do a collaboration or a commission, feel free to comment on any of my stories on here, or message me through my GSS profile. I'd love to find some way to get the ball rolling
8/9/20, 6:07 PM
This has a wonderful potential for a series. I think the grammar and spelling distracted me severely so I would encourage you to ask Martin or one of the more prolific authors to review and correct BUT NOT CHANGE the story. It must be yours and what a wonderful idea this is. Very original and sympathetic. The more potential and twists I see , the more I'm inspired to read. Very original and enjoyable!!
8/9/20, 4:43 PM
I must admit, I was expecting a meta story, where you and the AI battled over the writing of your story, with the AI trying to take the story in directions you didn't want. In the process, the AI would end up transforming not just the story but you as well.
8/9/20, 3:43 PM
Eh... not entirely, I think to edit out the obvious 'word generator' feel of these stories requires so much work the authors might as well just write them all themselves. Especially when they have your gift for language. This just left me cold.
8/9/20, 2:56 PM
I just posted a beautiful illustration my friend Max Spragovsky did of this story on the [FORUM](https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/king-rex-illustration/1773). Please look -- it's just awesome!
8/9/20, 2:28 PM
Fascinating developments. Please continue!
Anonymous
8/9/20, 2:16 PM
excellent
8/9/20, 2:15 PM
too many long sentences and paragraphs, it's hard for me to read. A shame, since based on the tags I would've loved this story