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8/9/20, 2:28 AM
If a story where a human can be turned into a robot and be considered ok for this site, a robot with human personality being reprogrammed and so, can also be ok. In any case, loved it. I like old men into subs, also feet <3
8/9/20, 1:22 AM
Jizzed halfway through. Saving the rest for later. Fucking hot!
Anonymous
8/8/20, 11:30 PM
great story. love cock shrinking on cocky jocks.
8/8/20, 10:45 PM
Thank you. It's always been my intention to finish it. The pandemic had made me quite depressed. But I'm feeling a bit better now. The conclusion should be along soon.
Anonymous
8/8/20, 10:26 PM
Hey, Goodtime, how are you? hope you're fine, dude. We haven't heard from you in weeks, I was wondeing if eveything was ok. iI was wondering if you would like to make a collaboration on a story, or maybe even to take a commission. Hope to hear from you soon!
8/8/20, 10:20 PM
thank you, keep going, this series is very fun to read
EJG
8/8/20, 10:02 PM
Hot. Loved it. Kinda wished ya got into the ;multiple; gay sex quicker, Hope theres more to this?
8/8/20, 9:32 PM
I was anticipating while Josh fucked Sean Cam would join into the sex and change as well. However, this build up surprised me and I wonder where it'll go!
8/8/20, 9:03 PM
I really like this story, so any complaints below I wouldn't even have bothered think of or write down if that wasn't the case. I love the slow mental transformation and how he tries to resist. I'm normally against identity replacement, as it creates a victimless crime, but when it is this well done I don't care. Being so specific is also a great turn on, not just a streetwearing hoodlum, but a sneakerhead with an affinity for worn in shoes. Not only does it make the new identity shittier, but also sets up a money drain in the form of his sneakers collection. This is perhaps where I would inject some more text. When asked for his rent he could recall his other apartment, bank accounts, furniture etc, but then immediately reject paying this Nik guy any money for an apartment he doesn't even want. Then he blows him in the hallway, and after that he remembers he works for Nik. He could just have asked for a deduction of his pay. Then his thoughts goes to his sneakers and his clothes, and he realize he would rather have another pair of snekers and blow him. Perhaps a win-win for him? He then again recalls his apartment, but can't remember where it is, or what's in it. It is great with a plausible reason for the whole transformation as well, but I would have preferred the epilogue to be integrated into the story instead, so that we end on J.D. wanking away his brain in the basement. Perhaps a few stray lines when he calls to complain. Perhaps she doesn't hang up properly and he can hear her talking to a coworker. There are details of course I would have done differently. I don't find hydro slides trashy enough, and would probably have gone with some really worn in sneakers or some thick socks worn so much they have black sole imprints under them. It's a big wasteful with both Nik and JD working and living in the same building, but perhaps Nik has more properties. I don't get the purpose of the Timberland boots. It's hot, sure, but doesn't obviously add to the Company plan. But in the end the only real oversight is that the text dosen't describe the smell of cologne as the first thing he notices as he opens the box.
Ula
8/8/20, 9:00 PM
This is one of the best stories I have read on here in a long time. Great idea, great writing, everything. Please write lots more!