Recent Comments

screamingmoist
8/8/20, 5:56 PM
The wardrobe ended up being an unexpected addition, but I really liked it once it was in there. Glad other people did too! Still not sure what I've got in mind for Lance yet, but I'll keep the papa wolf idea in mind.
giveintothemusk
8/8/20, 5:12 PM
This is excellent!
8/8/20, 4:53 PM
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8/8/20, 4:27 PM
Interesting setup, and nice to see decent writing and grammar. Can't wait to see what's next! Since it has an incest tag, I assume Tio Hector is going to breed Julio.
8/8/20, 4:25 PM
Ah you're back! I got so sad when I saw you'd deleted your twitter and I thought that was the last we'd see from you. Super hot story!
8/8/20, 4:20 PM
Gotta say, the haircutting scene, especially where the guy cries was really off-putting for me. All i could think of was how shaving people's heads has been done to de-humanise and humiliate people in concentration camps. That was just... too much for me and i stopped there. I still enjoy your works, but not this one, sorry mate, just my personal opinion.
8/8/20, 3:18 PM
I loved this! As well as your previous story, also in a gym setting! I do hope there will be more. Great job!
8/8/20, 3:04 PM
I loved this! Hope a Sequel Comes soon!
Jan 15, 2019
8/8/20, 12:51 PM
more! hot!
8/8/20, 10:27 AM
Liked the WEST WORLD vibe. Did the protagonist know from the beginning that it was a robot gym? He seemed reluctant at first and then all of a sudden... robots! I liked the feel and it's got some good possibilities -- especially, if like every other of the Michael Chrichton theme-park breaks down stories, it goes along that path. Keep going.