Hot. Loved it. Kinda wished ya got into the ;multiple; gay sex quicker, Hope theres more to this?

I was anticipating while Josh fucked Sean Cam would join into the sex and change as well. However, this build up surprised me and I wonder where it'll go!

I really like this story, so any complaints below I wouldn't even have bothered think of or write down if that wasn't the case. I love the slow mental transformation and how he tries to resist. I'm normally against identity replacement, as it creates a victimless crime, but when it is this well done I don't care. Being so specific is also a great turn on, not just a streetwearing hoodlum, but a sneakerhead with an affinity for worn in shoes. Not only does it make the new identity shittier, but also sets up a money drain in the form of his sneakers collection. This is perhaps where I would inject some more text. When asked for his rent he could recall his other apartment, bank accounts, furniture etc, but then immediately reject paying this Nik guy any money for an apartment he doesn't even want. Then he blows him in the hallway, and after that he remembers he works for Nik. He could just have asked for a deduction of his pay. Then his thoughts goes to his sneakers and his clothes, and he realize he would rather have another pair of snekers and blow him. Perhaps a win-win for him? He then again recalls his apartment, but can't remember where it is, or what's in it. It is great with a plausible reason for the whole transformation as well, but I would have preferred the epilogue to be integrated into the story instead, so that we end on J.D. wanking away his brain in the basement. Perhaps a few stray lines when he calls to complain. Perhaps she doesn't hang up properly and he can hear her talking to a coworker. There are details of course I would have done differently. I don't find hydro slides trashy enough, and would probably have gone with some really worn in sneakers or some thick socks worn so much they have black sole imprints under them. It's a big wasteful with both Nik and JD working and living in the same building, but perhaps Nik has more properties. I don't get the purpose of the Timberland boots. It's hot, sure, but doesn't obviously add to the Company plan. But in the end the only real oversight is that the text dosen't describe the smell of cologne as the first thing he notices as he opens the box.

This is one of the best stories I have read on here in a long time. Great idea, great writing, everything. Please write lots more!

Would love a follow up of Ben getting back to the apartment with Trevor, finding out that Trevor had made some changes to himself FOR Ben. Leading to one hot "wrestling" session and both of them having the most passionate sex.

The wardrobe ended up being an unexpected addition, but I really liked it once it was in there. Glad other people did too! Still not sure what I've got in mind for Lance yet, but I'll keep the papa wolf idea in mind.

This is excellent!

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Interesting setup, and nice to see decent writing and grammar. Can't wait to see what's next! Since it has an incest tag, I assume Tio Hector is going to breed Julio.

Ah you're back! I got so sad when I saw you'd deleted your twitter and I thought that was the last we'd see from you. Super hot story!