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8/8/20, 4:20 PM
Gotta say, the haircutting scene, especially where the guy cries was really off-putting for me. All i could think of was how shaving people's heads has been done to de-humanise and humiliate people in concentration camps. That was just... too much for me and i stopped there. I still enjoy your works, but not this one, sorry mate, just my personal opinion.
8/8/20, 3:18 PM
I loved this! As well as your previous story, also in a gym setting! I do hope there will be more. Great job!
8/8/20, 3:04 PM
I loved this! Hope a Sequel Comes soon!
Jan 15, 2019
8/8/20, 12:51 PM
more! hot!
8/8/20, 10:27 AM
Liked the WEST WORLD vibe. Did the protagonist know from the beginning that it was a robot gym? He seemed reluctant at first and then all of a sudden... robots! I liked the feel and it's got some good possibilities -- especially, if like every other of the Michael Chrichton theme-park breaks down stories, it goes along that path. Keep going.
8/8/20, 8:29 AM
I love this! I hope there's more so we can see him serving as a domestic servant 😍
8/8/20, 7:24 AM
I'm glad to see this series being continued!
8/8/20, 6:35 AM
Nice writing! I agree that it would be nice to learn Mark's motivations or maybe Owen is controlling him? Reminds me of the stepford wives
8/8/20, 4:42 AM
This story ended up going in such a different direction than I expected, I'm still not quite sure how I feel about it. I think it would have helped if we'd gotten a scene early on where Mark and Owen chat about their relationships, Mark expresses some frustration with Dave, and Owen brags about how he keeps his boyfriend in line.
8/8/20, 4:22 AM
I'm not sure if there's any actual mind control in this story, but it's still a hot scenario and creative bit of world building, full of possibilities.