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1/4/25, 9:10 PM
Amazing, read! I loved it

1/4/25, 9:46 PM
@[LKV11](/user/show/10013658) Thank you!
Anonymous
1/4/25, 9:12 PM
Great story, love coming back to it. Hopefully one day you come back.
1/4/25, 9:09 PM
Are you going to write again?
1/4/25, 7:54 PM
Well this just warms the cockles of my heart! Charlie, you should be incredibly proud of the wonderful story you've created and shared with us! So full of character, life, and - yes - juicy jock cake! :drooling_face: Can't wait to see what Luke, Sammy, Mark, and the gang will be up to! I know I'll be eagerly waiting!
1/4/25, 6:39 PM
Fantastic opening! I am looking forward to descriptions of how the Alphas train the Betas. I also wonder if the father will go through Beta training, too, once Andrew realizes he can dominate the entire family.
1/4/25, 6:08 PM
I'm impressed at how much is going on here and the detail and thought you've put into every strand. Like straight to gay is a um, not exactly uncommon kink around these parts but it's really fascinating how it's playing out here. Them knowing in advance that it's going to happen and dealing with the creeping change of sexuality, I enjoyed the spectrum of attitudes to it, from Yeong's eagerness to Ray's more tentative embrace of it. (Given my proclivities I enjoyed Yeong realising that yes indeed gay guys will enjoy straight guys turned gay jocks and just going for it haha). And of course there's Victor's decay which is very grim to start with but as we progress gets just a dash of sweetness mixed in with the bitterness, particularly given what they all go through I found Victor asking to be next to Liam in the vault quite a touching way to end the chapter. And in general it's sweet to see the support and acceptance the students get from others despite their self-perceptions/self-esteem issues.. mostly. (tell Ms Terrell I hate her smh)
Anonymous
1/4/25, 6:03 PM
More please
Marc
8/15/22, 9:53 PM
Really love this story , I’m a pretty big fan of your writing. I was wondering did you post your stories on DA in the past ? I remember someone with an username looking like yours but who deleted everything

Hypno-boy
1/4/25, 5:56 PM
@[Marc](/user/show/1614443) this is an extremely late response, and I'm sure you've forgotten all about commenting on this--- but I can tell you that I have never posted on a previous site and am unsure what DA is. Is that Deviant Art? Can you even post stories on there?
Anonymous
1/4/25, 4:33 PM
Really love it.

1/4/25, 5:28 PM
@Anonymous Thank you!
Anonymous
1/4/25, 5:24 PM
Doesn’t Jamie’s dad have a big muscular brother who’s overdue for a visit? And wouldn’t it be polite to offer him a cookie after a long drive?