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Tom
8/6/20, 7:01 AM
Loved it!!
8/6/20, 4:18 AM
A joyous surprise--another excellently crafted chapter! How you managed to hit so many notes that resonate with me is simply amazing. A domineering Master who is kind, yet will not settle until he has what he wants. A spirited servant, who actively contemplates what surrendering himself means. And most amazingly, both keeping their interesting personalities after the mental transformation is complete. I don't know how you did it, but I love it. There's so many amazing questions I'd love to see answered should you write another chapter. It's going to be fascinating to watch the Dragon Lord re-engineer his enchantments specifically to make Kethend into the best and brightest slave he can be, especially for ensnaring others and converting them to the Dragon Lord's hoard. It'd also be fascinating to see Resnlo purposely brought back for the Master's amusement, and have him realize what he's done...and how he may even willingly become Kethend again to feel the pleasure in service. Even seeing our "poor" servant be teased and tormented in order to perform at his best would be fun...I can't help but imagine a bejeweled chastity cage made of silver, making sure that Kethend's manhood is always touching his Master's hoard... Your setting is amazing, and your writing skills are superb. Thank you for sharing this--I enjoyed it immensely.
8/6/20, 4:16 AM
Nice twist to the story...did not see it cumming! You got me hard and leaking...onto chapter 3. Keep up the great work!
8/6/20, 4:08 AM
Great ending! The story kept me hard the hole time. It was like I felt each thrust of Dimitri's cock. Can't wait for more stories at the Gloryhole Hotel!!!
8/6/20, 3:57 AM
I wanna be Seth! Your writing makes me so hard and has me leaking! Keep writing about Seth at different hotels and I'm hooked. I hope Seth earns a million dollars!!!
8/6/20, 3:44 AM
You had me leaking the hole time! Great writing...I felt like I was in the hotel room watching. That got me harder. I wanted more and more guys. Keep up the good work!
8/6/20, 2:02 AM
I blew 2-3 full loads reading this story. I got hard, blew a hot thick load, and got hard again! Your writing kept me hard and leaking though out the hole story! You could feel the main character going deeper and deeper into sexual situations (and I wanted to join him). Keep up the great work!
8/6/20, 12:32 AM
I was going to say my sports would be wrestling, baseball and diving. Then I got to Jake's opinion of baseball players, thinking good gawd, what must he think about divers? Two strikes, pun intended. I'll keep my mouth shut (yet here I am telling it) What's with a Brad showing up again? And I was hoping the term you told me in previous comments would show up in the wrestler life, but alas, it didn't. Battle Rod.
8/5/20, 11:45 PM
Great set-up! Looking forward to where you take this next.
8/5/20, 10:22 PM
my COCK and l are loving your great story, well written