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8/4/20, 12:08 PM
Brilliant!
8/4/20, 11:01 AM
I hope the changes will be permanent, they deserve it, keep going
8/4/20, 10:40 AM
thanks! would love to write some more and get a bit raunchier - had to start off slow before fully turning Jason into a proper dirty pig slave of course lol
8/4/20, 9:41 AM
Ohboy! "And Then There Were None" is one of my favorite books, so this is going to be fantastic. As Hypnothrill said, don't be afraid to take time with the characters! You have set them up brilliantly. I cannot wait to see what happens next--but take your time in the writing! :D
8/4/20, 8:17 AM
Poor guy indeed. I never felt sympathy towards a man who would still joke about being a f-word. I would still "paint" him with my own special brew just to help him comfort him~ Also lovely detail on careless scrapping past flatten-ees still being repaired! Great story *not because you describe his feet well or anything ahaha*~
8/4/20, 8:10 AM
A fun spin on one of my favourite books! I'd love to see where this goes!
8/4/20, 8:09 AM
That was really good! I know it made him bored in the end, but I like the idea of MCing a whole neighbourhood so you could just walk into any house and fuck whoever you wanted at any time
TheBusterWolf
8/4/20, 7:46 AM
And then there were none is an amazing piece of literature. to read this spin on it will be highly interesting
8/4/20, 7:43 AM
Loving the choices and interactions here (and in the fabulously flamboyant last chapter). Fluffy-headed butt bois are always a wonderful surprise ^_^
8/4/20, 7:27 AM
Great start! I especially loved the poem that foreshadows what we'll see in future chapters. One note of caution: 10 characters is a lot for the reader to, um, keep straight. So make sure that your subsequent chapters include more background on the key characters.