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8/3/20, 8:03 PM
@JP28 Little exert at the end of Chapter 2; Rick had them break up with her and accept themselves as completely gay. Pretty much hung up on her and ended it instantly. Short little blip, but Kara was never meant to last ;)
8/3/20, 7:21 PM
@Buffy67 I kinda did too, I was expecting Matt to have the JJ character arc in Re-Educator, but I was pleasantly surprised that Chris and Alec got that moment instead so I'm still happy! Yeah.... I miss Re-Educator a lot so its good that Edlam still takes to his roots from time to time.
8/3/20, 7:07 PM
I liked but I wish Matt became an evil asshole
JP28
8/3/20, 6:37 PM
what happened to Kara?
Anonymous
8/3/20, 6:12 PM
This is the hottest chapter by far! What Rick did to Matt was hot. Rick's mind fuckery on Chris and Alec are also lowkey very insidious. I'm so glad that the closest people in their lives are all bottom bitches now. Really fantastic addition, you are impressive!
8/3/20, 5:46 PM
EdIam keeps the incredible stories coming with this latest chapter! Incredibly hot what happens to "poor" Matt! Rick is just a well crafted character with such an evil streak. Thanks, EdIam for bringing these hypno characters to life. You are very gifted and talented writer!
8/3/20, 5:42 PM
I love that Matt had awareness of what was going on. Rick should let some of his slots "wake up" from time to time to mindfuck them
8/3/20, 4:38 PM
I was reading this over the course of a day so i completely forgot this was you until i checked afterwards. i really liked the first two thirds of this. the sudden steriods kind of threw me out of the story and made it hard to appreciate the coach stuff at the end. probably knowing who wrote this (and when) would make it less jarring on reread. (Not a huge fan of an adult jerking off with teenagers, but it's such a small part I probably wouldn't bother me as much on reread either) Thanks for reposting all of this. it's really interesting and, of course, well written.
8/3/20, 3:42 PM
Happy birthday! This story is really awesome! But I have no idea what could come next, I must admit I thought this was the end before the author's note. But I'm sure you will find something incredible!
8/3/20, 3:04 PM
so hot! i love VR stories where straight boys get more than they bargained for. Can't wait to read more!