This is the hottest chapter by far! What Rick did to Matt was hot. Rick's mind fuckery on Chris and Alec are also lowkey very insidious. I'm so glad that the closest people in their lives are all bottom bitches now. Really fantastic addition, you are impressive!

EdIam keeps the incredible stories coming with this latest chapter! Incredibly hot what happens to "poor" Matt! Rick is just a well crafted character with such an evil streak. Thanks, EdIam for bringing these hypno characters to life. You are very gifted and talented writer!

I love that Matt had awareness of what was going on. Rick should let some of his slots "wake up" from time to time to mindfuck them

I was reading this over the course of a day so i completely forgot this was you until i checked afterwards. i really liked the first two thirds of this. the sudden steriods kind of threw me out of the story and made it hard to appreciate the coach stuff at the end. probably knowing who wrote this (and when) would make it less jarring on reread. (Not a huge fan of an adult jerking off with teenagers, but it's such a small part I probably wouldn't bother me as much on reread either) Thanks for reposting all of this. it's really interesting and, of course, well written.

Happy birthday! This story is really awesome! But I have no idea what could come next, I must admit I thought this was the end before the author's note. But I'm sure you will find something incredible!

so hot! i love VR stories where straight boys get more than they bargained for. Can't wait to read more!

@BankStreet Trust me I didn't enjoy writing that part. But, I felt it needed that for where it's going. Of course... I may be wrong ? :)

Way too much MF action for me. Chacun à son goût.

Although "Cursed Cocks" seems to end well, I cannot shake the feeling that this is really a horror story. I would like to explore this through one aspect of Marcus' story. After Marcus makes his deal with Brandon to try and get back to some kind of normal life he tells us that months later, > Sure, I sucked guys off instead of eating, but otherwise it was all pretty normal things. I did eventually learn I could eat regular food if I put enough cum on it Marcus' inability to maintain the regular diet of a human being is, for me, one of the strongest pieces of evidence that he is no longer entirely human. Now he must eat cum or at least soak other foods in cum before ingesting them. This reminds me of a scene from David Cronenberg's *The Fly* (1986), in which Seth Brundle (played by Jeff Goldblum) must do the same thing after beginning to transform into an insect. He vomits strong digestive enzymes onto his preferred sugary foods, otherwise eating them causes him pain. The scenes in which we see Brundle transforming into something not human yet still human are perhaps the most powerful, disturbing, and horrific of the entire film. It is the same for me with Marcus when he finds that he must subsist on cum. He experiences what he calls a "hunger" that he "gives into," leaving home and using his new supersensory abilities to locate a victim and then overwhelm them with his musk in order to feed on their cum. Marcus may have managed to return to something seeming like a normal life, but it is in fact a kind of horror that he must cope with each day. There is yet another level at work to the horror of it all since Marcus seems to have not only accepted his new reality but even enjoys it. I am interested in how Erik is coping with his new situation. I also wonder who the guy was who took Erik's cock, physically removing it and then taking it away with him. Was it Brandon? And in any case I am sure that Brandon's backstory and role in "Cursed Cocks" is must more extensive than either Marcus or the reader know. I hope that "Cursed Cocks" continues, if not this particular story then the world in which it takes place. Will we ever know more of the secrets of this world or of Marcus, Erik, and Brandon?

very hot, thank you!