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8/2/20, 11:10 PM
*edit. My birthday is actually today, I didn't get my revisions done on this chapter last night like I'd intended.
8/2/20, 10:50 PM
Oh my god this ending was so great! I REALLY love Matt's demise and I love how his friends were pretty much responsible for it! Really love this conclusion and it was a great follow-up to the first two chapters! Rick has easily become one of your best characters!
Anonymous
8/2/20, 9:50 PM
Amazing ending! I liked how Matt tried to fight but at the end he ended up embracing the true. Such a shame the serie is over, but i wonder... is there a way to make another serie to see more about Rick house and slaves (to see what happened with Matt and Steve) or to know what will happen to them when they get old? i know Rick doesnt like old slave, but for me its s turn on controlling older fit men, so itd be really nice to see it. I say it again... nice work with this serie!
Mar 28, 2020
8/2/20, 9:41 PM
i wish this was continued. this is really a promising story
8/2/20, 9:05 PM
hot story. fun read
8/2/20, 8:31 PM
Thanks for the quick note on the formatting guys! I don't know why the copy-paste from my source cocked that one up. I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I'm gonna try to write a good story for each of the War Dogs and a few more besides. And trust me, the sexy stuff is coming soon!
Nutiper
8/2/20, 8:12 PM
*Damn* what a start! From the first few paragraphs, I found myself anticipating (and hoping for) a delicious, gradual development of this promising dynamic between Yates and the werewolf regiment -- and boy, did this chapter deliver! Sets up a lot of hot tension; some *great* worldbuilding going on in the background; and five distinct characters who play off each other really well. And then, that surprise at the end, with Aed's hypnotic voice, making anything he says become the new reality for Yates: whew!! I liked how clearly reluctant Aed was to have to use this power on Yates, but also, how much it affected Yates... Dreaming about it afterward... even thinking of himself as "Roman" for a moment because that's how Aed described him... I'm really looking forward to reading more of this story!
8/2/20, 7:30 PM
Awesome first chapter! I look forward to reading more. Dace, you're one of my favorite authors on this site.
8/2/20, 7:30 PM
> Lol. Never in my wildest dreams did I expect to see a reference to fucking Trumpton on GSS of all places! I'm pleased that you're amused, since that's the reaction I intended. The idea was provoked by the Fire Brigade being called out to extinguish a neighbour's flower bed. I'm now wondering whether the soldier-boys at Camberwick Green's Pippin Fort are actually drones.
8/2/20, 6:08 PM
> I know these kind of stories are basically identity death escapism, but will there be one where the previous personality is at least partially retained? > You may need to read another author. :)