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Drake Nightstrom
8/1/20, 7:07 PM
I really enjoy what you have so far. Keep going.
8/1/20, 5:22 PM
I wonder... if he cursed to do that to any guy fucking him? anyway, that was hot!
8/1/20, 4:12 PM
Well done! Hot, smart story!
8/1/20, 3:59 PM
That was a really great chapter. My tolerance for 'darker' things areva lot higher than some so this didn't bother me at all. What an awesome series, well done!
Feb 14, 2009
screamingmoist
8/1/20, 3:02 PM
Thanks! Feels like a lifetime ago, so I'm glad to hear it still holds up.
8/1/20, 3:01 PM
Swizzington, my glib answer to your question is that brainwashing is easy, but ESL classes are hard.
Swizzington
8/1/20, 2:56 PM
Really enjoyed this! I found the construction workers saying "Welcome to Dicksburg" in Spanish particularly hot for some reason. Although, now that I think about it, given the way the three boys were changed in terms of speech and culture, why weren't the Hispanic dudes brainwashed to speak only English?
Anonymous
8/1/20, 2:52 PM
excellent
Feb 14, 2009
8/1/20, 2:48 PM
Classic. Just came back to re-read. Great story!
8/1/20, 1:57 PM
I agree with the previous commenter. This was humming along nicely, but then the end comes very suddenly. It feels as if there is more to Torg's story before we can consider Eddie's story properly resolved.