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8/1/20, 3:01 PM
Swizzington, my glib answer to your question is that brainwashing is easy, but ESL classes are hard.
Swizzington
8/1/20, 2:56 PM
Really enjoyed this! I found the construction workers saying "Welcome to Dicksburg" in Spanish particularly hot for some reason. Although, now that I think about it, given the way the three boys were changed in terms of speech and culture, why weren't the Hispanic dudes brainwashed to speak only English?
Anonymous
8/1/20, 2:52 PM
excellent
Feb 14, 2009
8/1/20, 2:48 PM
Classic. Just came back to re-read. Great story!
8/1/20, 1:57 PM
I agree with the previous commenter. This was humming along nicely, but then the end comes very suddenly. It feels as if there is more to Torg's story before we can consider Eddie's story properly resolved.
8/1/20, 12:45 PM
Fantastic ending! Adding the plantation definitely makes it darker, as you say, but it's an important reminder, too. Also, the detail of Youssef eating Virginia Ham after being taken is a great one--really demonstrates his fall from freedom. As always, dear Hypnothrill, you are amazing!
8/1/20, 11:12 AM
Hot ending to a great story
Lusty Stallion
8/1/20, 6:52 AM
Wow - I didnt see that comin
8/1/20, 1:39 AM
Please continue!
8/1/20, 12:43 AM
> The Strongman has never been happier. > And you say that before you've even "met" him!