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7/31/20, 6:03 AM
Edlam, RobinHood, both are the best ones as mind control storytellers
Johnthedoe
7/31/20, 5:35 AM
Yeah the original version was much less cramped but my brain added so many interconnected plot lines that trying to fit it in the word count allowance of the challenge scrambled everything. It's taking me quite some time to weave them all back together but I will make it happen.
bleuboy
7/31/20, 3:00 AM
This ticked my boxes. A dominant muscle bottom daddy is 10/10 in my book. Patiently waiting for next/last chapter ;)
7/31/20, 2:46 AM
Can't wait to see where this goes!
Jul 30, 2020
7/31/20, 2:17 AM
It's fairly humorous thus far. Curious how things will go. :)
Anonymous
7/31/20, 2:11 AM
would love if the jock malfunction and fully controlled paul and went against his will to turn him into a dumb jock
7/31/20, 1:48 AM
The lore is coming along nicely man.
7/30/20, 11:45 PM
>We’ll use this as the template for our wrestling match > I love wrestling! So many matches over the years. My common issue is I ALWAYS get hard when I wrestle -- "Battle Rod" my coach used to call it. Domination gets me off....
Jul 30, 2020
7/30/20, 11:22 PM
Whoops, his butt is gay. How cheeky. I’m intrigued to see where it goes.
Ng5hvlo4
7/30/20, 11:19 PM
I rather enjoyed the two little demons already converted as a foreshadow to what would happen next. Would have enjoyed more details about their interactions with one another, their mental processes, and about the rubber, but really I just want to know what happens next. What challenges the demon king will face? how the favored minions will be used?