Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/30/20, 9:41 PM
Great series and well written! Hope the camera finds its way back for more adventures with Derek.
TheNorad
7/30/20, 8:53 PM
I really enjoy the series so much! I love the way you write and I am really curious about the "future Pine" we glimpse at from time to time and hope we can follow Pine around to become more and more like this mysterious savior x) Keep up your great job!
Martin
7/30/20, 8:40 PM
Why don't you add an invitation link to your Discord server in your story? I'm totally fine with that!
7/30/20, 8:22 PM
Can't wait to see what new changes will happen to him! And I totally feel Paul on the short height thingy. if I had one of those jocks, I'd surely end up into a towering beast haha
7/30/20, 8:03 PM
this looks like the beginning of an awesome and hot series!
Anonymous
7/30/20, 7:54 PM
Always a fan of a new story from you!
7/30/20, 7:44 PM
I'm rooting for Paul to get a good ending, and if the Mojox completely destroys Paul by making him dumber or anything, I'll be disappointed.
7/30/20, 7:38 PM
keep going, please
Anonymous
7/30/20, 7:38 PM
excellent work
Anonymous
7/30/20, 7:25 PM
I'm really intrigued with this fanfic try spreading it around like a virus while getting superheroes and villains to his potential harem and or possibly an army.