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7/30/20, 7:37 AM
I think perhaps this story tries to do too much. There's a lot going on and it doesn't seem to come together in a way that the reader can follow. I can feel the intent of the story and generally follow the plot but it was confusing.
7/30/20, 7:13 AM
Good story. Definitely gives off heavy Black Mirror vibes, not that that's a bad thing. Sometimes got a little confusing who was where, but then again so did the character so that was probably intentional.
Lusty Stallion
7/30/20, 7:02 AM
amazing story! Not so keen on the twist but the story got me gking. thanks
Lusty Stallion
7/30/20, 6:40 AM
what a great story. i loved it all. muscle growth, age change, compupence. perfect
7/30/20, 5:51 AM
This was not usually my cup of tea, but the ending resolved most of my concerns (not a fan of possession or race change oriented stories as a general rule) if not exactly aroused, by this unique take on the possession angle. You've managed something better than erotica, you've managed sexy art.
Jul 28, 2020
J
7/30/20, 5:29 AM
Interesting view. Handled well. Sometimes being a little more vague about subject's body (ie, eye color and such) would help for others to be pulled into story. Thank you!
7/30/20, 5:17 AM
SOOOOOO sexy. LOVING this. And very very excited to see Youseff's experience in the next chapter...
7/30/20, 3:50 AM
That was really great man. Wish I had one kicking around.
7/30/20, 3:26 AM
Excellent! Loved his growth into a superior, mature muscular man.
7/30/20, 3:04 AM
great read! very interesting perspective. frankly, based on the summary i was expecting English to become Sergei - a great twist of fate. great job朗!