Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/29/20, 7:27 PM
I don't want to be mean but nothing happens in this story; it just quickly builds to something that never happens, there isn't even a part 2. It's tagged with male on male sex, humiliation, hypnosis, boots, and leather but none of that is in this story except for one of the characters mentioning that he doesn't have time to clean his boots so I guess technically there are boots in this story...
7/29/20, 6:49 PM
That's a fair critique, and if I were writing a story in which the town itself was the main character, I would probably need longer to explore it. But I structured the story around the three outsiders entering the town: Rob, Xander, and Youssef. In Chapter 1, you got to see Rob fall under mind control, and in this chapter it was Xander's turn. (Guess who the focal character is for Chapter 3!) But I encourage other writers who like this premise to set other stories in Dicksburg or to invent your own fictional small Southern towns where gay sex and mind control run rampant.
Anonymous
7/29/20, 6:33 PM
Sorry to say but I'm very disappointed at how short this was. I kinda wish we got more exploration of the city, meet more citizens and have some more hot, steamy fun. I dont know how the author plans to make a complete story with only one more chapter, but so far, this feels like it was rushed and ended abruptly. Sorry for the sad comment :(
7/29/20, 6:05 PM
too bad we did not see how most of the faculty changed with the
7/29/20, 5:16 PM
Very hot on the whole, and I share the other pups' desire to experience Eric's fate. That said, the story could benefit from a better setup sequence and a little more exposition and clarity at the end.
7/29/20, 5:00 PM
so, we're probably going to Jeff's pa now? I mean,we saw him in the video... Welcome to Dicksburg
7/29/20, 4:40 PM
Honestly I do love the wish fufillment/reality change stories. slowly turning the world to a gay erotic fantasy.
Anonymous
7/29/20, 4:33 PM
can't wait for more, hope to see a harem for Peter
7/29/20, 3:47 PM
Very, very hot chapter. It's sad to learn that there's only gonna be one more chapter after this, I would've liked to read more about life at Dicksburg
7/29/20, 3:40 PM
Super Hot!!!! Now, about those lips? you must continue!