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Masters boy lucky lucky Tim
7/29/20, 9:55 PM
lucky lucky Tim id love an older Master tho im 55 maybe im to old😫😫
Masters boy
7/29/20, 9:35 PM
i could do with a leather Master love leather men great story has me hard all the time thank you Sir
7/29/20, 9:07 PM
Hello! Hope you're doing well. I just want to say hi, I hope you're fine and safe. It's been a long since the last time we heard from you. Not to pushing you to write more, its simply to know you're fine. Hugs!
7/29/20, 9:06 PM
Now this is getting more interesting! I'm sure none of us would mind if the story is stretched out longer than intended. Too bad there'll just be one more chapter left...hopefully while we'll see how Youssef will be converted, we'd be able to get a few more glimpses into the life in Dicksburg, what sort of gay debaucheries are the town's men being subjected to, and who may be the mastermind behind it all.
7/29/20, 8:33 PM
Thank you for the continuation! The wait was totally worth it, this is one of my favorites here on this website!
Masters boy the.
7/29/20, 8:20 PM
the. author has written a classic eeotic supernatural thriller haa me hooked thank you Sir
Masters boy
7/29/20, 8:09 PM
this author knows how to tell a story doea capture your i imagination and keeps you waiting for more absolutely fantastic one of the best i have read well done Sir please more like this thank you 👍👍👍👍
Anonymous
7/29/20, 7:27 PM
I don't want to be mean but nothing happens in this story; it just quickly builds to something that never happens, there isn't even a part 2. It's tagged with male on male sex, humiliation, hypnosis, boots, and leather but none of that is in this story except for one of the characters mentioning that he doesn't have time to clean his boots so I guess technically there are boots in this story...
7/29/20, 6:49 PM
That's a fair critique, and if I were writing a story in which the town itself was the main character, I would probably need longer to explore it. But I structured the story around the three outsiders entering the town: Rob, Xander, and Youssef. In Chapter 1, you got to see Rob fall under mind control, and in this chapter it was Xander's turn. (Guess who the focal character is for Chapter 3!) But I encourage other writers who like this premise to set other stories in Dicksburg or to invent your own fictional small Southern towns where gay sex and mind control run rampant.
Anonymous
7/29/20, 6:33 PM
Sorry to say but I'm very disappointed at how short this was. I kinda wish we got more exploration of the city, meet more citizens and have some more hot, steamy fun. I dont know how the author plans to make a complete story with only one more chapter, but so far, this feels like it was rushed and ended abruptly. Sorry for the sad comment :(