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8/21/20, 9:40 PM
so the balloon lead to the self inflation, the measuring tape led to the "snake" growth. simple household items leading to changes... need to find connect something finding clothes for the behemoth, and maybe something less to lead to the expansion of the property so it's more fitting to Richard's current build
Anonymous
8/21/20, 9:38 PM
super hot. hope theres more
8/21/20, 8:54 PM
will we see a new part soon?
Anonymous
8/21/20, 8:40 PM
loved this!
8/21/20, 8:13 PM
Would love to see more of Benji! I echo the comment above that would be super hot
8/21/20, 7:56 PM
I see, so let's see what happens to them in two chapters
8/21/20, 7:52 PM
@darkblade2814 - Good question. I think it only affected these three. I expect to see a couple of the untransformed firefighters show up for chapter 16, but I just barely started writing it, so let’s find out what happens together. (I have a plan when I write, but I’m pretty seat-of-my-pants when it comes to certain details.)
8/21/20, 7:46 PM
I loved this one, but I have a questions, the totem just affected them, or it affected all twelve? if it went to all of them, will we see the others in their snippet?
8/21/20, 7:38 PM
Really enjoyed it. I like this version of corrupted Peter, he's being the dominant one but he's not being super aggressive about it. Symbiotes, mind control, and a protagonist who is becoming more powerful is definitely pushing the right buttons for me. Looking forward to the next chapter.
8/21/20, 6:55 PM
@anon - That's... kinda tempting. The downside is that the AI really isn't great at plot, though it really excels in descriptions. The farther we get into this, the more that having a memory and being able to structure a plot matters. I'm planning on doing a forum thread once this is all wrapped to talk about the experience of writing with AI... might attach something like that as an example of the naive approach to letting AI handle it.