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7/28/20, 4:21 PM
Hypnothrill never disappoints. Can't wait for the next chapter
7/28/20, 3:41 PM
Nicely detailed description.
7/28/20, 3:24 PM
Oh wow, this site gets new stories fast! Completely missed Edlam's update. Anyway, Chris and Alec are so cute together!!!! I can't wait to see what Rick does with Matt!
Swizzington
7/28/20, 2:40 PM
Lol. Never in my wildest dreams did I expect to see a reference to fucking Trumpton on GSS of all places!
Swizzington
7/28/20, 2:33 PM
Wow. Some people are waaay too sensitive. I actually thought Hypnothrill was very fair in the way he handled that aspect of the story.
7/28/20, 2:27 PM
CAST OF CHARACTERS The characters in this story were all based on bodybuilders I was crushing on at the time of writing (2004). If you want a visual reference -- or want to see how well I did describing them -- Google Image the heck out of them. WOODY -- Art Atwood (RIP) BRAD -- Brad Hollibaugh PRINCE -- Tom Prince PALUMBO -- Dave Palumbo ROMAGNA -- Jim Romagna
7/28/20, 2:05 PM
> In your stories, even though some of the protagonists’ desires come true, there’s always a cost (and an underlying message of “be careful what you wish for”). > That's true in life, right? There's always a cost or a sacrifice. Obviously, I would like nothing more to be true than a magic potion or super-steroid or whatever wish-logic shortcut makes me huge, but sadly, there is only years of hard work and sacrifice -- I HATE THAT! I think you can read a lot of the hive-mind, secret jock society angle in my work because I so badly wanted to be part of something like that when I was a high school loser. And I really did THINK those guys were all... different than me -- that they knew something I didn't know, or they took some drug that made them that way. Maybe hypnosis... We are all born of our fantasies. The irony is that now I have a great body and those jocks from high school have long since passed their prime.
7/28/20, 1:00 PM
nice gradual takeover, loved it!
7/28/20, 12:58 PM
Nice!
7/28/20, 12:49 PM
That's so interesting about the initial response to your story, Absman420! I remember reading it on MGS at the time it was originally posted, but I was a lurker on that site, so I never posted about how much I liked it. But the only reason I came back to that site was to read the darker muscle growth fiction that you and a few other writers (like FanTCMan and Magus) were posting. I would get so annoyed by the simple-minded wish fulfillment fantasies that some other writers were posting. In your stories, even though some of the protagonists' desires come true, there's always a cost (and an underlying message of "be careful what you wish for").