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Anonymous
7/27/20, 4:45 PM
Well written and suspenseful! what's going on? What did that "medical procedure" do? Why are there no scars? What is happening to the hero?
Anonymous
7/27/20, 4:40 PM
interesting premise!
7/27/20, 4:24 PM
Casey needs more quality time with his master. Hopefully that comes in the next chapter! also, your writing is impeccable. After this series, I'll look forward to more of yours!
7/27/20, 4:21 PM
BobbyBlobfish I left subtle hints in the first line of the original story when I wrote it from Tom's point of view, the text says that they've been dating 6 months and are already living together. This is just it coming full-circle. As I've said in previous comments, everything I do is intentional as far as the stories are concerned.
7/27/20, 3:50 PM
Awesome story set. Very enjoyable.
7/27/20, 3:47 PM
It would be interesting to do a follow up to this fabulous saga. Following the Gym-Bunnies now that their king had fallen. Does Rook take over? What has Romagnia become after the beat down. Short interlude of Woody setting up the West Coast gym....Strongman comes to its "opening" for existing clients from out there. What becomes of the publisher or anyone that Strong actually fucks? Eventual new clients or gym members? It does hold up very well. Thank you for sharing again.
Anonymous
7/27/20, 3:42 PM
very hot. needs another chapter
Nov 6, 2019
7/27/20, 3:39 PM
Your writing style is so effortless and your attention to detail really draws us into the scene. Every time I think I know where you are going, you take me in another, more satisfying direction. You always avoid the cliche. The time lavished on the first seven parts of this story contrast with the rushed part eight. But what a run!
7/27/20, 3:36 PM
Please, sir. Can I have more?
Anonymous
7/27/20, 3:23 PM
I thought this was well written. The author did a very good, detailed, believable job describing the transformation from being a tall, scrawny, stereotypic "twink" to an equally stereotypic, dumb jock bro. The contrast was kind of funny, since usually the character becomes gay or stays gay or retains his own identity while manifesting changes. It would be interesting to see "New" Vince meet "Old" Vince. Does "Old Vince" turn into "Danny"? Possible grounds for a sequel!