Recent Comments

7/26/20, 11:15 PM
Very hot, super excited for these three to see all the fun Dicksburg has to offer!
7/26/20, 11:00 PM
thanks for joining the hype train. next chapter will be released: Soon *tm* I'm glad you continued, cant wait for the continuation.
Drake Nightstrom
7/26/20, 10:46 PM
Not bad for part two. Intersting twist.
7/26/20, 9:39 PM
I'm excited about the hot Muslim guy
7/26/20, 9:35 PM
Thanks for commenting! I put this story on the backburner because it wasn't as well received as my others... but comments like yours make me more pumped to keep writing. I do have one or two more chapters in mind...
Martin
7/26/20, 9:30 PM
Hot hot hot!
7/26/20, 9:26 PM
You have such a twisted imagination! I'm amazed!
Martin
7/26/20, 9:18 PM
Please don't make us wait that long for the next installment! I want to know what will become out of 219!
7/26/20, 9:12 PM
Great exposition for a future tale. Descriptions and dialog are believable and interesting. I see there was criticism of your paragraphs but I didn't notice much wrong with them. Maybe what you are writing is more of a novel than a short story. i look forward to reading more.
7/26/20, 9:11 PM
> I swear that my last decade of personal growth has just been me giving in to my fantasies, one at a time. > In my opinion, that's a life well lived!