Recent Comments

7/26/20, 9:35 PM
Thanks for commenting! I put this story on the backburner because it wasn't as well received as my others... but comments like yours make me more pumped to keep writing. I do have one or two more chapters in mind...
Martin
7/26/20, 9:30 PM
Hot hot hot!
7/26/20, 9:26 PM
You have such a twisted imagination! I'm amazed!
Martin
7/26/20, 9:18 PM
Please don't make us wait that long for the next installment! I want to know what will become out of 219!
7/26/20, 9:12 PM
Great exposition for a future tale. Descriptions and dialog are believable and interesting. I see there was criticism of your paragraphs but I didn't notice much wrong with them. Maybe what you are writing is more of a novel than a short story. i look forward to reading more.
7/26/20, 9:11 PM
> I swear that my last decade of personal growth has just been me giving in to my fantasies, one at a time. > In my opinion, that's a life well lived!
transformheaven
7/26/20, 8:32 PM
Good start! can't wait to see where this will go :)
7/26/20, 8:20 PM
HOT DAMN! Hypnothrill is back with a vengeance. I loved the story, and can't wait to see where it goes!...well, actually, I *know* where it's going (everyone ends up happily enslaved and horny for men), and yet getting there is always fun and incredibly sexy. That's what makes you a master, Hypnothrill!
7/26/20, 8:11 PM
very hot and can not wait for the next part.
Anonymous
7/26/20, 7:56 PM
i need a part 3 or way more to this!!!