I don't like identity death, as this story completely erased Danny for Vincent. As hot as it was, psychological murder does not sit well on my plate.

This chapter is a tour de force of plot and pyschological development. I can't wait for the next installment! I am particularly intrigued by the curse's effects spreading out from the individuals who come into contact with Marcus/Mark and now impacting the physical environment of the world around them. It is also interesting that Mark, now that he seems to have accepted the curse, can apparently exercise more control over it. Is he even cooperating with the curse in a kind of bargain? For example, in the store he managed to not only buy his clothes but interact with Brandon without too much trouble. Mark is undergoing so many physical and mental transformations that I wonder what he will look like when the curse is complete. I appreciate very much the mixing of humor and horror. The effect of Mark's musk on other men as he walks across campus is almost comic, turning them into dazed schoolboys in front of their crush. At the same moment, the musk's effect is deeply unsettling, causing the men to lose their reason and give way to lust. They are quite literally stopped in their tracks, forgetting what they were doing and beginning to act in ways that would probably have shocked them only a moment before. It is likewise with the image of the middle-aged man, who might be considered more mature and in control, losing all sense of himself when he smells Mark's musk. The concluding scene is striking. Mark leaves home to feed, which may seem an odd way to put it. However, he himself says as much with the words "I have to eat cum to survive... I give into the hunger and let it take some control over me." The way in which he finds the skater is as a predator searching for its prey and then moving in for the kill. Mark uses the very word prey when describing his actions! What passes between the two men is difficult to describe, since it encompasses moods ranging from pure lust to a touch of romance as when Mark observes, "He continues to make out with me, and honestly that’s the part that’s more pleasurable." The curse is clearly in control, guiding the skater to make Mark cum before he himself s drained of cum. The detail of Mark's new strength and dexterity is very striking, as when he physically lifts the skater off the ground and holds him in the air and sucks him off. Then, as a predator after a successful attack, Mark leaves his wounded and disoriented prey as he returns to his lair. If I were Erik (and I knew these things) I would be very concerned with sharing any time with Mark, let alone sharing the same room. I have no idea what is going to happen in the next chapter. Rather than frustrating me, it's got me hooked to see what the curse has in store for Mark, Eric, and the world around them. "Cursed Cocks" is easily the best multi-chapter story I've read this year... compliments and keep it going!

So hot! Watching Casey finding obedience to be his overriding motivation and being trained to the clicker is what submission is all about and what so many of us crave and need. Love this story!

I'd give anything for the next installation! too tantalizing! Amazing work, as always, Hypnothrill

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I love literally all of Hypnothrill's work. VERY much looking forward to the next installation.

I really enjoy the attention to detail regarding the road trip itself. Most people wouldn't bother to think about which states one needs to go through to get to the Gulf from Chicago. Also I like that there's an established reason why Youssef is in a potentially dangerous area of the country right now, and why he agreed to go in the first place. It's these little things that tend to be overlooked because they might not seem important to the overall story, but really are the foundation of one's narrative. Great start! I'm looking forward to see what happens next!

BRUCE? Wayne. Gotham? These detract completely from the story you were creating. very nice gothic plot had a novel and creative potential. Florid writing with archaic imagery. slowed down the progress.

Off to a great start! Looking forward to the guys' stay in Dicksburg...

Woof. Keep it going, I love this series.