Recent Comments

7/26/20, 4:06 PM
best part
Anonymous
7/26/20, 3:56 PM
I love literally all of Hypnothrill's work. VERY much looking forward to the next installation.
7/26/20, 3:51 PM
I really enjoy the attention to detail regarding the road trip itself. Most people wouldn't bother to think about which states one needs to go through to get to the Gulf from Chicago. Also I like that there's an established reason why Youssef is in a potentially dangerous area of the country right now, and why he agreed to go in the first place. It's these little things that tend to be overlooked because they might not seem important to the overall story, but really are the foundation of one's narrative. Great start! I'm looking forward to see what happens next!
Anonymous
7/26/20, 3:26 PM
BRUCE? Wayne. Gotham? These detract completely from the story you were creating. very nice gothic plot had a novel and creative potential. Florid writing with archaic imagery. slowed down the progress.
Zac
7/26/20, 3:22 PM
Off to a great start! Looking forward to the guys' stay in Dicksburg...
7/26/20, 2:59 PM
Woof. Keep it going, I love this series.
7/26/20, 2:45 PM
I hope you are doing well in those times
7/26/20, 2:36 PM
What an amazing treat. I instantly thought of the porn when I saw the title. Happy to see that you felt inspired by it too . The porn had such a good premise so it is nice to see it in the hands of a much better writter. Can't wait to see the continuation.
7/26/20, 2:24 PM
Anything's short compared to your epic sagas, Swizzington! But I promise there's more to come soon. And I grew up in the South, but now I live halfway across the world (relatively close to the destinations that inspired "Bolshoi Papa" and the "Scrubbed Clean" series).
Swizzington
7/26/20, 2:18 PM
This is exactly the type of story I love, so I hope they'll be more to come. This was promising, but tantalizingly short. :-) Btw Hypnothrill, do you live in the South?