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7/26/20, 2:36 PM
What an amazing treat. I instantly thought of the porn when I saw the title. Happy to see that you felt inspired by it too . The porn had such a good premise so it is nice to see it in the hands of a much better writter. Can't wait to see the continuation.
7/26/20, 2:24 PM
Anything's short compared to your epic sagas, Swizzington! But I promise there's more to come soon. And I grew up in the South, but now I live halfway across the world (relatively close to the destinations that inspired "Bolshoi Papa" and the "Scrubbed Clean" series).
Swizzington
7/26/20, 2:18 PM
This is exactly the type of story I love, so I hope they'll be more to come. This was promising, but tantalizingly short. :-) Btw Hypnothrill, do you live in the South?
7/26/20, 1:38 PM
Thank you for this awesome story. It's exactly how a human should be turned into a drone, being aware and left to suffer under the control.
7/26/20, 1:35 PM
very good! dont find too many possession stories that incorporate farting but this was very well done
Anonymous
7/26/20, 1:17 PM
This is a really hot series.. Please make more
7/26/20, 1:02 PM
will we see part 3 soon?
7/26/20, 12:01 PM
This kind of transformation story isn't my favorite genre, but I think you do a really good job with it, blending details of the physical change with plenty of details about the mental change. A couple of small editing suggestions: I found the references to the pandemic at the start of the story needlessly distracting. Somehow the idea that it would disappear "as suddenly as it had begun" seemed less believable than the whole premise about possessed swim trunks. I was also very distracted by the character name Vincent Chase, since that's the name of the protagonist of the show Entourage. And I kept picturing actor Adrian Grenier rather than the character you were actually describing.
7/26/20, 9:43 AM
> Loving the story, even if it’s not getting the ending I was hoping for! > We're still a couple chapters away -- what was the ending you were hoping for?
7/26/20, 9:41 AM
> Well, I guess it rubbed off on me ;) > I love things that rub off on me...