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7/26/20, 1:35 PM
very good! dont find too many possession stories that incorporate farting but this was very well done
Anonymous
7/26/20, 1:17 PM
This is a really hot series.. Please make more
7/26/20, 1:02 PM
will we see part 3 soon?
7/26/20, 12:01 PM
This kind of transformation story isn't my favorite genre, but I think you do a really good job with it, blending details of the physical change with plenty of details about the mental change. A couple of small editing suggestions: I found the references to the pandemic at the start of the story needlessly distracting. Somehow the idea that it would disappear "as suddenly as it had begun" seemed less believable than the whole premise about possessed swim trunks. I was also very distracted by the character name Vincent Chase, since that's the name of the protagonist of the show Entourage. And I kept picturing actor Adrian Grenier rather than the character you were actually describing.
7/26/20, 9:43 AM
> Loving the story, even if it’s not getting the ending I was hoping for! > We're still a couple chapters away -- what was the ending you were hoping for?
7/26/20, 9:41 AM
> Well, I guess it rubbed off on me ;) > I love things that rub off on me...
Anonymous
7/26/20, 9:34 AM
Ooh, now I LOVE that. There's a lot of scope there - it's just about trying to balance the story so that everything isn't massively weighted towards Jafar - which'll be hard seeing as he is now God.
7/26/20, 8:18 AM
I hope there's more to . it's a very hot premise
Sc
7/26/20, 7:41 AM
Can't wait to see more!!
7/26/20, 7:21 AM
Loving the story, even if it's not getting the ending I was hoping for! You are a great writer and I really get into all your stories!