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7/26/20, 1:02 PM
will we see part 3 soon?
7/26/20, 12:01 PM
This kind of transformation story isn't my favorite genre, but I think you do a really good job with it, blending details of the physical change with plenty of details about the mental change. A couple of small editing suggestions: I found the references to the pandemic at the start of the story needlessly distracting. Somehow the idea that it would disappear "as suddenly as it had begun" seemed less believable than the whole premise about possessed swim trunks. I was also very distracted by the character name Vincent Chase, since that's the name of the protagonist of the show Entourage. And I kept picturing actor Adrian Grenier rather than the character you were actually describing.
7/26/20, 9:43 AM
> Loving the story, even if it’s not getting the ending I was hoping for! > We're still a couple chapters away -- what was the ending you were hoping for?
7/26/20, 9:41 AM
> Well, I guess it rubbed off on me ;) > I love things that rub off on me...
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7/26/20, 9:34 AM
Ooh, now I LOVE that. There's a lot of scope there - it's just about trying to balance the story so that everything isn't massively weighted towards Jafar - which'll be hard seeing as he is now God.
7/26/20, 8:18 AM
I hope there's more to . it's a very hot premise
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7/26/20, 7:41 AM
Can't wait to see more!!
7/26/20, 7:21 AM
Loving the story, even if it's not getting the ending I was hoping for! You are a great writer and I really get into all your stories!
7/26/20, 6:58 AM
I want a story about cumming on sleeping dad's feet
7/26/20, 6:47 AM
I must say, as I read this chapter, I though a similar thing to tempest888: Till that point in Jay's Big Hypnotizing Cock, I had the feeling he already was somewhat of a sadist and a narcissit; and then this chapter show him having empathy and the twin look like they will corrupt him. However, I'm not against the idea, sound really interesting actually. The only issue is that this more emphatic side of Jay seems to come out of nowhere and wasn't forshadowed in the first two chapters. It's a bit distracting.