Sad about the cheese but *ludicrously turned on by the condom TF*, wow. I hope Hubby asks for what I think he's going to ask for!

this was so hot! glad you're back on this.

That was fantastic! I can't wait for the next chapter! I really like the way you write. The plot is intriguing, the story advances at a perfect pace, not too fast nor too slow, the descriptions are detailed and well-written. You certainly gained a new fan :) Oh and since you asked about suggestions here is something you might find inspiring for your future chapters. After the first installments, I had the impression you were preparing a story based on two main axes: on one hand, a villain who's sole intention was to enslave the world and on the other hand, the resistance. More precisely, the resistance is composed by all those who don't want to surrender willingly to Jafar. Jafar even though he is so powerful and knows that with a snap of his fingers he can enslave all mankind instantly, as the incarnation of pure evil, he prefers the "journey" to the "destination", simply because he knows that he has already reached the destination the moment he was set free. So he uses his twisted, sadistic plans to play/torture/break and eventually transform all those who dare to defy him and have the illusion they can win! In order to create multiple possibilities for many chapters with various kinds of torture/mind break/transformation, you could write about a resistance which is composed by leaders and ordinary people. Leaders could be men who excel in many things: leadership, courage, intelligence, physical prowess etc. I am not talking about superheroes. Those men could be army people like marines or maybe cops, firefighters, gym rats etc. with an alpha-male personality. The qualities those men have are relevant only to leadership. As far as it concerns morals and ethics, each of these leaders could have different perspectives as to what is ethic and what is not. Since they are all human after all, they as well have a dark side of themselves with fetishes and kinks. And this is exactly what makes the game interesting/spicy/intriguing/exciting for Jafar. Since Jafar is a mastermind in deceiving people he could take these leaders, play with them, break them, corrupt their ethics and morals into the exact opposite. Everything that was good turns to evil and those who weren't so "good" and became leaders only because they were selfish arrogant alpha-males with a high esteem for themselves and would not accept to be dominated by someone else, Jafar could take their dark side and fetishes and twist them even more to the point were they turn into demons who’s purpose is to spread corruption to the world. To sum up, each leader could have his own chapter(s). Jafar takes the leaders one by one and turns them into his generals/trainers (their duty to corrupt and train the corrupted). Another thing that could be interesting is evil “double agents”. More precisely, Jafar corrupts some of the leaders and turns them against their people. Everyone knows they turned evil. But, Jafar who likes playing dirty and adores deception, turns some of the leaders into his evil generals and sends them back to the resistance. The resistance does not realize that they have turned evil something that will lead them to their doom. The evil generals pretend to be good and assume their initial role as leaders and turn the good men one by one into Jafar’s slave whores. That’s all I could think! I know I wrote a lot. I hope I didn’t give you a headache with my ideas. Since you asked for suggestions, I thought it would be better to write something in detail to help you as much as I could. I hope you will find something that pleases and inspires you. I can't wait to read your next chapters 😊

Really liked this! Got ME hard...

Damn, bro! One of my very favorite series on here. My only complaint is it's too short, haha. I wanna see what the next bedtime story leads to!

Nice! Too short for me to cum to, so you'd better make it up to me with another chapter! 😈

So hot!!!

This is incredibly hot, and well written too! Keep it coming!

While I do enjoy this series there really is no villain or someone for Pine to defeat. It is just moving one between one story plot to another. You set up a great villain in Leo but than it really did not go anywhere... Like I said I do enjoy the series but I feel like it needs something more to it.

Always open to suggestions! If anyone fancies spicing up the sauce.