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7/26/20, 7:41 AM
Can't wait to see more!!
7/26/20, 7:21 AM
Loving the story, even if it's not getting the ending I was hoping for! You are a great writer and I really get into all your stories!
7/26/20, 6:58 AM
I want a story about cumming on sleeping dad's feet
7/26/20, 6:47 AM
I must say, as I read this chapter, I though a similar thing to tempest888: Till that point in Jay's Big Hypnotizing Cock, I had the feeling he already was somewhat of a sadist and a narcissit; and then this chapter show him having empathy and the twin look like they will corrupt him. However, I'm not against the idea, sound really interesting actually. The only issue is that this more emphatic side of Jay seems to come out of nowhere and wasn't forshadowed in the first two chapters. It's a bit distracting.
boi98229
7/26/20, 6:24 AM
I second that last motion to continue the story. i would really like to know how our boy might fit in with the cartel, and what they have in store for him. Thanks for the first chapter.
Drake Nightstrom
7/26/20, 5:37 AM
Well this was very good! I wish it was a little longer or the changes were more gradual. Other then that I really enjoyed it. Hope to see more.
7/26/20, 4:13 AM
I like that it is not young guys. that is a nice change and think the theme is hot would like to see more of the place as a whole love the inclusion of this small group of men used differently then the others. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
7/26/20, 3:53 AM
> Sad about the cheese but ludicrously turned on by the condom TF, wow. I hope Hubby asks for what I think he’s going to ask for! Yes, I find that there is *something* about the TF premise. There is, of course, a very obvious "something else", but there's not a great deal of scope in the story premise for a continuation. I suppose the original malefactor could cause another reality change, or the big wizards, in trying to fix things, mess things up further. Yes... Cheese is returned to the world. To celebrate, "Babes" asks "Officer" to order a pizza and is immediately turned into a dildo...
7/26/20, 3:32 AM
This is a really fun prequel series. Keep it up!
7/26/20, 3:21 AM
I remember this chapter and the previous being my favorites, though I was a little disappointed that the protagonist didn't fall under and lose control. Still really hot though.