Recent Comments

7/25/20, 12:25 PM
How do I rate this higher than 5. Loved the last part.....can't wait to see how this finishes. Prefer that it didn't though.
Kelly
7/25/20, 11:55 AM
Really enjoyed this!
7/25/20, 11:44 AM
YOU'RE BACK! Finally. And the new chapter didn't disappoint. I just love everything about this story.
7/25/20, 11:42 AM
keep going, please
martin
7/25/20, 11:27 AM
any installment for this?
7/25/20, 11:13 AM
really enjoyed the chapter. poor Alan. Tbh,I hope Leo doesn't get off that easy. I'm excited to see what happens next
7/25/20, 11:07 AM
hot story bro! i love bewildered transformations into muscle sluts!
Jason
7/25/20, 10:54 AM
A **Very** nice idea for the story!
7/25/20, 10:31 AM
great chapter. I wanna see Andrew both both father and son
7/25/20, 10:21 AM
> Fingers crossed for a happy ending, but like S.T.U.D. I’m more expecting an ambiguous or bittersweet one. > I remember S.T.U.D.D. having a happy ending. I originally wrote it as a four-parter, ending w the narrator becoming "dumb" -- but that felt incomplete to me, so I did a pt 5 where it was revealed that the dumbing-down was actually part of the transformation process and only temporary. Everybody got what they wanted in the end. Hopefully that will happen here!