Recent Comments

7/25/20, 6:29 AM
there will always be someone unhappy, though i am enjoying your story.
firesix
7/25/20, 4:43 AM
What a great story! I got really excited seeing your author name pop up, since it's basically a guarantee of something hot, and this was a real treat. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up!
7/25/20, 4:21 AM
Fantastic story. Please continue.
7/25/20, 3:20 AM
That ending was excellent! I'm realizing now though that the story is over and there'll be nothing new this week...bummer. Welp, just have to look forward to your next submission. Keep up the great work!
Nutiper
7/25/20, 3:11 AM
Damn, I remember those books too! I immediately thought of them when reading this. A really hot spin on the idea! (And, Swizzington, the only thing better than one hot story about a cursed camera is two hot stories about a cursed camera. Looking forward to your story as well!)
7/25/20, 2:44 AM
Loving the story, one point, he has been loving his change all along and suddenly wants escape. I'm not sure there has been enough build for that change of attitude yet. Don't stop though, I admit I secretly hope he revisits his own fantasy and embraces the change again, especially since the story has already laid the background that he has not yet fully reached is maximum potential.
Swizzington
7/25/20, 2:17 AM
Haha, this is funny! I've actually been in the process of writing my own story with VERY similar photography themes, based on the "Say Cheese and Die!" book. Looks like you beat me to it :-)
nycboot
7/25/20, 1:51 AM
Such beautiful writing. e.g. ""...my rosebud opened to my Lord." For me, the spiritual context makes the actions all the more powerful and potent. Really beautiful.
7/25/20, 1:41 AM
please keep this series going ... you write well, and your stories are hot. i do like the direction that this fun is going in and would live to see Jay have some fun with the twins. maybe he dominates one to be his and leaves the other alone and he is unaware his brother has been taken?
7/25/20, 1:02 AM
Just a tiny red dot. Power in darkness hidden by size. So much better than the usual spiral or interference screen. There are many reader comments on this site after a good story such as "take me!!" "I want to join that gym" "how do I get some of that" etc. It's guys in real life wanting their fantasies to come true, to be in that story, regardless the cost. And now we see Strong doing it. Giving in to his fantasy. Excited about the new him balanced with just the right amount of nervousness. Just a red dot...and he happily gave into it. Bravo! As would we all!!