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7/25/20, 10:31 AM
great chapter. I wanna see Andrew both both father and son
7/25/20, 10:21 AM
> Fingers crossed for a happy ending, but like S.T.U.D. I’m more expecting an ambiguous or bittersweet one. > I remember S.T.U.D.D. having a happy ending. I originally wrote it as a four-parter, ending w the narrator becoming "dumb" -- but that felt incomplete to me, so I did a pt 5 where it was revealed that the dumbing-down was actually part of the transformation process and only temporary. Everybody got what they wanted in the end. Hopefully that will happen here!
7/25/20, 10:16 AM
> Loving the story, one point, he has been loving his change all along and suddenly wants escape. > There is a wonderful dichotomy in Strong -- as in all of us -- his fantasy is coming true, but he's afraid of it as much as he loves it. I think his attempt to "escape" is a final manifestation of that fear, right before he's forced to go "all the way" -- which, as before, both turns him on and terrifies him simultaneously.
7/25/20, 9:24 AM
fuck yeah!!! love innocent boys with a horny ghost camera! can't wait for part two!
Leo
7/25/20, 9:19 AM
Wow this was an incredible chapter!! I love that Roger got to keep both of his daddies at the end of the day, very sweet. I’m really gonna miss this story but I’m really looking forward for the long overdue chapter of “Personal Toy”. Please don’t stop what you’re doing! You’re seriously so talented and great at writing. If you had a book filled with these stories I’d buy it <3
7/25/20, 8:23 AM
Glad I'm not the only one who also thought of that story, just from reading the short description!
7/25/20, 7:09 AM
i was understanding of why you ended where you did, the two humans were just jafar extensions at that point and the story would have been difficult to continue. starting with introducing a new character away from Jafar was a brilliant choice, and i will gleefully read whatever you choose to put forward. dont take some negative feedback over the ending to heart. sometimes the ending that the story demands is not tje wish fulfillment ending some want. compromising story for a lackluster ending just sucks, so i'm glad you stuck to your guns on the ending of the last chapter, even as i look forward to this new perspective.
7/25/20, 6:29 AM
there will always be someone unhappy, though i am enjoying your story.
firesix
7/25/20, 4:43 AM
What a great story! I got really excited seeing your author name pop up, since it's basically a guarantee of something hot, and this was a real treat. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up!
7/25/20, 4:21 AM
Fantastic story. Please continue.