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martin
7/25/20, 11:27 AM
any installment for this?
7/25/20, 11:13 AM
really enjoyed the chapter. poor Alan. Tbh,I hope Leo doesn't get off that easy. I'm excited to see what happens next
7/25/20, 11:07 AM
hot story bro! i love bewildered transformations into muscle sluts!
Jason
7/25/20, 10:54 AM
A **Very** nice idea for the story!
7/25/20, 10:31 AM
great chapter. I wanna see Andrew both both father and son
7/25/20, 10:21 AM
> Fingers crossed for a happy ending, but like S.T.U.D. I’m more expecting an ambiguous or bittersweet one. > I remember S.T.U.D.D. having a happy ending. I originally wrote it as a four-parter, ending w the narrator becoming "dumb" -- but that felt incomplete to me, so I did a pt 5 where it was revealed that the dumbing-down was actually part of the transformation process and only temporary. Everybody got what they wanted in the end. Hopefully that will happen here!
7/25/20, 10:16 AM
> Loving the story, one point, he has been loving his change all along and suddenly wants escape. > There is a wonderful dichotomy in Strong -- as in all of us -- his fantasy is coming true, but he's afraid of it as much as he loves it. I think his attempt to "escape" is a final manifestation of that fear, right before he's forced to go "all the way" -- which, as before, both turns him on and terrifies him simultaneously.
7/25/20, 9:24 AM
fuck yeah!!! love innocent boys with a horny ghost camera! can't wait for part two!
Leo
7/25/20, 9:19 AM
Wow this was an incredible chapter!! I love that Roger got to keep both of his daddies at the end of the day, very sweet. I’m really gonna miss this story but I’m really looking forward for the long overdue chapter of “Personal Toy”. Please don’t stop what you’re doing! You’re seriously so talented and great at writing. If you had a book filled with these stories I’d buy it <3
7/25/20, 8:23 AM
Glad I'm not the only one who also thought of that story, just from reading the short description!