Recent Comments

7/24/20, 6:13 PM
I don't want to be *that guy* but, I might actually have an idea, if you lot want me to give it another crack?
Anonymous
7/24/20, 6:04 PM
Since there are so many of us who would like to see a different ending or a continuation of the story there is only one thing left to do! Ask if someone else would like to continue the story :D It's an open community story and HunkLover said that we could write additional chapters so hopefully someone will take it from here and create an alternative ending!
7/24/20, 5:49 PM
Feels like the calm before the storm.
7/24/20, 4:40 PM
Oof, poor Liam! I hope he gets at least a bit of payback by the time the game is over. You're very good at getting into his headspace. Looking forward to the enxt chapter!
7/24/20, 4:34 PM
I definitely think the twins should go under his spell accidentally and than it becomes permanent. That could be a lot of fun!
Anonymous
7/24/20, 2:29 PM
You really just effectively named the company Penis Land, huh?
7/24/20, 1:48 PM
Was glad he made the right decision to return. Would really like to read a next chapter.
Jul 16, 2018
7/24/20, 1:10 PM
An overlooked piece of writing by a talented author who need not be just a one story wonder.
Anonymous
7/24/20, 12:24 PM
chapter 2?
7/24/20, 12:19 PM
very well written and paced, congratulations. Ook Ook Ook.