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7/24/20, 1:48 PM
Was glad he made the right decision to return. Would really like to read a next chapter.
Jul 16, 2018
7/24/20, 1:10 PM
An overlooked piece of writing by a talented author who need not be just a one story wonder.
Anonymous
7/24/20, 12:24 PM
chapter 2?
7/24/20, 12:19 PM
very well written and paced, congratulations. Ook Ook Ook.
Anonymous
7/24/20, 12:06 PM
you should get the twins under his spell somehow
7/24/20, 11:51 AM
you've certainly got my fag boner hard and leaking, thank you so much
Anonymous
7/24/20, 11:34 AM
love the story
7/24/20, 11:29 AM
man,I was wondering how this would go down,but I didn't expect this approach. so they'll probably get hypnotized one by one. I really like this story of this 'office'. This style could be really cool
7/24/20, 10:25 AM
APOLLYON is based on a gym I went to while I lived in NYC -- the mid-city gym on 49th or 52nd (can't remember exactly). The entrance was just as I describe APOLLYON, a small street entrance that led to a windowless basement gym. When I was there, it was seedy and old school -- it's since changed owners and is now a lot more "fancy" and modern, but I LOVED it at the time! Still have my branded t-shirt!
7/24/20, 10:04 AM
Love it!