Recent Comments

7/24/20, 9:37 AM
this was fantastic! love how a bunch of older dads were mind controlled. I hope to see more. Not enough stories of dad being enslaved on here. keep up the hot work.
Anonymous
7/24/20, 6:53 AM
love your stuff, would love to see more stoner content too
7/24/20, 6:49 AM
What a clever story! I love it--it's funny, you describe the characters perfectly, and you write a good old-fashioned hypnosis scene (guys going slackjawed and sleepy is what awakened this fetish in me, so it's always nice to see a return to form). Amazing!
Blake
7/24/20, 6:28 AM
I love this story!! I it crossed my mind and I had to reread the whole series hope he continues someday its so hot and great story telling!
Anonymous
7/24/20, 4:17 AM
Spectacular
7/24/20, 3:11 AM
Hot story, looking forward to part 3
7/24/20, 1:09 AM
Oh wow, what a fun one I don't think I've read before! Really enjoyed where this went, and would love to see a part 3, even if it is 7+ years later! ;)
Jul 23, 2020
7/24/20, 1:07 AM
I was kinda hoping for a full on Sense8 style orgy tbh buy this is fun too lol
7/24/20, 12:44 AM
I liked seeing the beginning of the negative with Jeff. I was rooting for Brian...oh no, maybe I'm jealous too. The dichotomy between Apollyon and the Fitness Factory was great. Both multi leveled facilities, but you made the levels so hot at Apollyon and so wretchingly annoying at Fitness Factory. I can feel the bad music. It was a fun read.
7/24/20, 12:42 AM
>We both agreed on the same person. And it was a quick answer. It is a compliment to your writing. > I love minor characters! They can be anything. My favorite is a character you'll meet in the very last chapter: Christian. On an unrelated note: I think everyone should be a server at some point in their life -- it teaches you how to treat other servers. (I also think everyone should try to teach!)