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Anonymous
7/23/20, 10:55 AM
WE NEED MORE!!!
Sep 19, 2016
7/23/20, 8:01 AM
I stumbled upon this story by accident and I was very glad that I did. This story seriously needs a sequel! If the author still exists, please come back and post an update!
giveintothemusk
7/23/20, 6:38 AM
😚👌
Jul 23, 2020
7/23/20, 5:49 AM
Now I want to hear the stories of the other guys.
7/23/20, 5:23 AM
Hey, I wrote this story years ago and let someone repost it on NCMC for me. Is there any way I can get it switched over to my author page?
Jul 23, 2020
7/23/20, 4:46 AM
Great job! I'd to love to read more from you!
That one guy
7/23/20, 2:42 AM
i just... feel sad after reading all these. I think what makes it sad rather than hot is that Tom didn't do anything to provoke the blackmail and he's just miserable the entire time as his life gets destroyed. i hope the ending is a bit happier with him either enjoying everything or with Jay finally laying off him.
Anonymous
7/23/20, 1:43 AM
Can't wait for the final installment!
7/23/20, 1:36 AM
good concept. great execution
7/23/20, 1:08 AM
> Actually, Derek, thank you. You’ve given me an opportunity to do a WRITING 101 blurb, something I’ve been looking for the excuse to talk about since I’ve started reposting this series. Thanks for posting that, it’s interesting. I definitely structure my multi-chapter stories to feel like satisfying conclusions, then add a tag to lead towards the next chapter. Definitely not as compelling as what you’ve done here. I don’t know how we’d do it, but sometimes I think that a couple dozen of the authors on this site should get together and write ‘how it’s written’ style pieces to talk about aspects of their work. I think it’d be a fascinating read, especially in a niche genre like this. Which is to say - anything else you’re hoping someone will comment on? I’d love to hear whatever thoughts you’re burning to share about writing.