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7/21/20, 10:31 PM
More please. This needs to be redone and drawn out day by day then continuing after transformation. Excellent story.
7/21/20, 9:30 PM
> ...as a guy who does a little gymnastics here and there, I’d have a hard time pulling off those moves. Can’t imagine how hard it would be for someone as big as Strong... > I misremembered it, personally. I thought Strong leg-pressed the bench from the floor -- I'd forgotten that I'd made it so complicated. I think it was a question of leverage, because those kind of details MATTER in a jerk-off story! > Strong seems like he’s gaining mass fast. Like, even fast within a universe with magic gear. I wonder what his real potential is. > Or what the repercussions are.
7/21/20, 9:25 PM
I am really excited to see what happens!
7/21/20, 9:24 PM
This is expertly written, extremely hot, and perhaps my favourite story on the site. 10/10
7/21/20, 9:05 PM
That wasn’t what I expected. Loved every word. I gotta say, as a guy who does a little gymnastics here and there, I’d have a hard time pulling off those moves. Can’t imagine how hard it would be for someone as big as Strong. Well described, I could visualize every move. Strong seems like he’s gaining mass *fast*. Like, even fast within a universe with magic gear. I wonder what his real potential is.
7/21/20, 9:04 PM
> Oh man, I would LOVE to see you write more chapters of “Pollination: The Series" > Honestly, I have the entire thing plotted. I would have to go through and change some character names, tho. There are some "real life" people in it -- for various reasons -- and I'd want to "fix" that.
7/21/20, 8:47 PM
I like the setup cant wait for more. I was sad the story want any longer, but what I read of it was great. Once again cant wait.
7/21/20, 8:44 PM
Oh man, I would LOVE to see you write more chapters of "Pollination: The Series." I'd pay good money for that!
7/21/20, 8:35 PM
SO HOT!!!! I love the helplessness of the hosts and the domination of the masters, its very well described and erotic. I always love reading men succumb and being taken down mercilessly, unable to fight back. Really great job to the anon writer, you have my approval! One slight thing that I wish you did was bring back some familiar characters from the earlier chapters like the baseball team or the coach or the gymnastics team from that school. These scenes are so much more impactful if the reader has an idea on which person this thing is happening to and I think it would enhance the whole reading experience. I hope you consider that on your last chapter. Anyway, great job and stay awesome!
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7/21/20, 8:29 PM
Great work, love the ending!