Recent Comments

7/21/20, 7:03 PM
Loved this. The character's emotions and motivations really shone through, and it was a really hot read overall.
7/21/20, 6:30 PM
Awesome concept and writing :)
offeringservice26
7/21/20, 6:18 PM
really outstanding! So creative. One of my favorites in a long time
7/21/20, 5:30 PM
And that's that. I think I've gone as far as I can with this new adventure of everybody's favourite evil, red, megalomaniacal genie. I could attempt to write about Jafar and Jake's apotheosis, but in all honesty, I think you can all picture that far better than I could put it down in words. Though I'm sure some people would like additional chapters from me (incidentally, thank you all so much for your wonderful, positive, inspiring and generous comments for a 1st time writer) in the real world, much like the world of Jafar, Jake and Majid, good doesn't always triumph over evil and we don't always get what we want... for now. However, I will be opening this up as a community story and would love to see where the talented writers of this fantastic website can take it next. I may have come to the end of this tale as its author, but after all, Every Ending Is A New Beginning.
Nutiper
7/21/20, 5:17 PM
I think that Jake turning inanimate (whether as Jafar's cock, or his lamp) would violate the wish, though? If Jafar is freed, he won't have a lamp anymore, and so they won't be together anymore. And Jafar could always make his dick disappear (not that he would *want* to... but, if he theoretically had the power to get rid of Jake in such a simple way, then it would violate the wish as well). Jafar looking at Jake with "uncertainty" while granting his wish makes me wonder if Jafar himself fully knows how the wish will play out. Or, maybe Jafar is "uncertain" because he knows that granting the wish will seal him back into the lamp -- and now, possibly with Jake in the lamp too, as a second genie... I don't actually know how things will play out, of course -- I'm just speculating, like everyone else! It's been fun to see the story develop, and I'm also enjoying how involved all us readers are getting in the comments.
7/21/20, 4:58 PM
Wonderfully written-literary, arousing, and evocative. As earlier commentors have said, it is not blantantly erotic, but it is indeed sensual and appealing in the way only a truly good fantasy tale can be.
SionOfMerlin
7/21/20, 4:53 PM
Swizzington, ReMinder, nerdysuitedbaby - I've made a few changes to characterise James closer to the way I envision him, and yes, CHapter 2 is in the works. More suit filled, corrupty fun!
7/21/20, 4:47 PM
This story doesn't seem to be pulling in that many votes. Regardless, I would hope that the author will work to continue this in the future. I know I'd enjoy it!
7/21/20, 4:11 PM
hot. cruel,but hot. Lee's an asshole but I bet everyone with that power would become one
7/21/20, 4:09 PM
Don't be too sure about that. I'm funding a bunch of guys who commit to a weekly update schedule, and their "stories" are getting shorter and shorter and *shorter*, to the point where I'm getting fed up. I think I'd rather throw a buck or two at someone who writes exactly the kind of stuff I like (and you definitely do), *well*, takes their time, and gets out one hot story - or even a chapter - each month.