Recent Comments

Nutiper
7/21/20, 5:17 PM
I think that Jake turning inanimate (whether as Jafar's cock, or his lamp) would violate the wish, though? If Jafar is freed, he won't have a lamp anymore, and so they won't be together anymore. And Jafar could always make his dick disappear (not that he would *want* to... but, if he theoretically had the power to get rid of Jake in such a simple way, then it would violate the wish as well). Jafar looking at Jake with "uncertainty" while granting his wish makes me wonder if Jafar himself fully knows how the wish will play out. Or, maybe Jafar is "uncertain" because he knows that granting the wish will seal him back into the lamp -- and now, possibly with Jake in the lamp too, as a second genie... I don't actually know how things will play out, of course -- I'm just speculating, like everyone else! It's been fun to see the story develop, and I'm also enjoying how involved all us readers are getting in the comments.
7/21/20, 4:58 PM
Wonderfully written-literary, arousing, and evocative. As earlier commentors have said, it is not blantantly erotic, but it is indeed sensual and appealing in the way only a truly good fantasy tale can be.
SionOfMerlin
7/21/20, 4:53 PM
Swizzington, ReMinder, nerdysuitedbaby - I've made a few changes to characterise James closer to the way I envision him, and yes, CHapter 2 is in the works. More suit filled, corrupty fun!
7/21/20, 4:47 PM
This story doesn't seem to be pulling in that many votes. Regardless, I would hope that the author will work to continue this in the future. I know I'd enjoy it!
7/21/20, 4:11 PM
hot. cruel,but hot. Lee's an asshole but I bet everyone with that power would become one
7/21/20, 4:09 PM
Don't be too sure about that. I'm funding a bunch of guys who commit to a weekly update schedule, and their "stories" are getting shorter and shorter and *shorter*, to the point where I'm getting fed up. I think I'd rather throw a buck or two at someone who writes exactly the kind of stuff I like (and you definitely do), *well*, takes their time, and gets out one hot story - or even a chapter - each month.
7/21/20, 3:03 PM
Yay! Great subversion of the wishes. At a guess, Jake is now Jafar's lamp :)
7/21/20, 1:51 PM
I took a quick look at it. I do like how old school jrpg it is. I like how they displayed the "move selections". I'd definitely play that game! haha Star World would have sexual content, but wouldn't really be focused on it? Fortunately bad (good people) like Dennis like to spice it up. In the future I would like to consider more sexual focused game where people come in expecting to be taken advantage of my AI Monsters.
Anonymous
7/21/20, 12:32 PM
Could you please write a part 2, I'd love to see Thomas in Kyle's body explore his new body some more, find a guy, go out on a date, get laid in his new body for the first time as well as deal with the old Kyle's life and friends, having them surprised that Kyle is gay adjusting to knowing this new Kyle. And perhaps if you want write a third chapter where the old Kyle does find a new body, not as good as his old one and tries to track down Thomas in his body wanting to get it back... without actually being able to. Just some thoughts. Excellent otherwise.
7/21/20, 12:08 PM
Awesome assimilation story...loving the aspect he had to watch others being assimilated and fearing the process and planning how to resist just to fail in the end. Would love finding myself in such a predicament...also the idea with kids being speed matured to be assimilated...awesome