Oh boys! I hope you're going to like the next chapter.

Loved this!

nice, the plot thickens. I hope this story continues

Another possible way to complicate things for Jafar is to have Jake realize how, in their shared fantasy of Jafar being all-powerful, Jake is totally absent from the picture. And he could confront Jafar about it. And if Jafar says something like "why, you'll simply be one of my *many* adoring slaves," Jake could decide that's not good enough for him and wish to be Jafar's favorite. Becoming Jafar's favorite (favorite slave? favorite fucktoy? how would Jafar interrpet this?) wouldn't be all fun and games, since it *is* Jafar. But it could be one way to add an interesting aspect to Jafar's desires while keeping Jake a main character in the story, and still giving Jafar a path to world domination.

the difficult thing would be keeping the story from stalling out if Jafar gets too powerful too fast. perhaps one more road block from an ineptly worded wish from Jake (he still has two left) like, Jake loves Jafar, he wants Jafar to rule the world, but he also WANTS Jafar. We've already proven that Jake's hedonism is strong enough to corrupt Jafar's power lust, why not let it happen again? Jake could wish that Jafar could take over the world without wishing for Jafar's freedom, which leaves Jafar nearly all powerful, but still bound to Jake. Now he would just have to convince Jake to make a third wish to free him or when Jake wishes a third time it will send Jafar back to his lamp.

LOVE the hypnotizing dick and the innocent way the main character introduces it to his friend. The power bottom bit was great too.

To be fair, the mention of Godrick’s Hollow was some very subtle set up about the story being set in the HP verse. Okay, so I have a (non-professional) interest on quantum mechanics, and someone being able to publish a paper about consciousness influencing the wave function collapse in the 21st century kinda breaks my suspension of disbelief. The scientific consensus has been for quite a while that the wave function *doesn't* collapse -- particles are waves, and waves can look fairly similar to particles, with any difference becoming negligible when you zoom out. And a particle being "in two places at once" is a natural consequence of it being a wave -- since waves are by definition spread out in space (and time). However, I believe that something like finding out that consciousness can "jump" branches of the wave function (a.k.a. traveling to an alternate history) would be received with a similar degree of skepticism, but would be something publishable given enough evidence -- even if it'd invalidate most everything we know about quantum mechanics and neuroscience. > ...the can of worms that arise from something James called a “Time turner”. Apparently, P = NP when you can abuse cause and effect. Oh, is that a reference to *Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality*? Nice, very nice.

I for one really like the inclusion of older people on the site, it's so rare. I am even considering writing a part as a fellow-up actually, but I prefer some light romantics than humiliation and that detours the main theme of the story :-(

@PEN15LUVR Reading how you enjoyed my perversions lit up my day so much, so thank you for taking the time to tell me. So since you are correct in that you are NOT going to see a specific description of all the dragons in my hoard I'd thought to just give you a brief overview of what I did have as far as Dragon Lore and just put up here that anyone who wishes to use THIS interpretation of Dragon Lore needs only ask my permission via my email, which I will always provide. Reds are the dragons of the mountains, they breath fire, which is different from the bronzes who are dragons of the volcanos and breath magma. Bronzes are considered extremely enterprising because once one is of sufficient age to truly shape-shift, they often loan out their services to coastal and island societies who are looking to keep this or that portion of their land from sinking/ or expanding their land to match population growth. Bronzes' prices are tremendous, but their work is fairly unique and as this is the natural way volcanic islands are actually made, there is a natural assurance of success. Blues are dragons of the oceans and breath high powered water streams, Greens are dragons of the plains and 'breathe' sonic attacks. Browns are smaller, because they are dragons of the forests who breathe poisonous gas. Oranges are the dragons of the deserts and they are known as oasis dragons, they are able to take in water and after building the right bowl shape, they can call back that water and create an oasis, but water sitting in an orange dragon's specialized water pouch is tainted. Those who drink it react like they have eaten the wrong kind of cactus, but it's not a toxin, it's the dragon's natural magic. Orange dragons pick off desert trading caravans and foolish explorers this way. White Dragons are dragons of the deep underground. They are blind, with excellent hearing and smell. White dragons expel a form of blackness that is like the dust off a cave in, it's choking and blinding. Silvers are the dragons of the tundras breathing various ice volleys to include the oldest ones just creating a wall of ice to encase who is in the cone of effected area, These love the freezing mountain peaks and all those northern and southern extreme environments. Gold dragons are dragons of the sunlight, considered to be sky dragons or sun dragons. They have the strongest wings (and two sets) and typically spend most of their time in the sky. They breathe searing light. Black dragons are dragons of the swamp lands. They are the most dangerous because they don't have a 'breath weapon' per se, but they are notorious for their illusions. Each dragon is born as a dragon, and must live until 'adulthood' satisfied with their own shape. They start with base animal intelligence, which grows as they grow. By the time they are big enough to leave the nest they can talk, barter, appraise, hunt, deceive, and much more. It's only until one's second century that a dragon may shed it's scales and take on different shapes and even more devious or enterprising plots. Dragons are born a color, but if they choose to live long enough in one environment and dedicate their natural magics towards it, they can alter their physiology to fit their surroundings. @DragonKink The curses that are going on in the Dragon Hoard are extremely layered, hence why Charroweir has built into his 'security system' a means of ensuring that the intruder's minds don't break once they come in, especially since he wants them alive for ... 'sorting' I guess is the word I'm going to use. BUT, since I TOTALLY want to brag about all the layers going on here lets start with the Keep itself. Each room and hall has two objects specifically in it. One is an innocuous item that carries a curiosity spell that permeates the room, causing the whole room to seem magical somehow, which is of course very curious and maybe things should be investigated more closely. Second, is an object that LOOKS like it might me a secret entrance, or some secret hiding thing that's fairly obvious, and this one only has a suspicion spell on it: There are secrets around here somewhere, but they MUST be found! Since the curiosity spell is LITERALLY everywhere like the smell of cooking gets through the entire home these two spells force a snail's pace through Charroweir's keep. These spells run on two timers, one runs most of the night and keeps intruders OUT of the hoard, one runs just a few minutes before dawn and all daylight hours and directs intruders towards the hoard. Servants are instructed to ignore intruders that have not done bodily harm as this is just going to drive the curiosity and suspicion spells way up. Pieces Renslo is affected by: Light off gems of need to touch the hoard Touched gems of dragon is lord of all treasure Mirror of see beauty as treasure The pieces Renslo steals: Necklace of joy in the hoard Wrist cuffs of belonging in the hoard Belt of Dragon is Lord of the hoard The gems themselves have a blanket curse on all of them against intruders, it's a low grade mental change, most wouldn't notice it, because most thieves sit there and know they are STEALING a DRAGON'S TREASURE. It wouldn't do a damned thing if the light off the gems itself wasn't spelled with the compulsion and that light didn't hit a thief's eyes over and over. This also wouldn't do much if the large items didn't have their specific spells on them. As you can see, Renslo had terrible luck as each item built on each other in the best/worst way. Once Charroweir has neutralized an intruder, he takes specific items and creates specific spells to 'program' his servants.

Loved this. Loved how Leonetti and Manny are tops and Lucus is kind of both but definitely a bottom to Leonetti, and Duchamp is a bottom. Loved that. Loved the rimming and the fucking. Loved the idea Leonetti taking Duchamp at some point, hehe. The whole thing with the two being cops was hilarious and amusing. It does make me want to see them get some more fireworks and use it on a field with all the cops, hehe. That said, what I really would love to see is Leonetti fucking Duchamp, claiming his partner's ass. Maybe after a hard day's work. :) Good stuff, enjoyable story.