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Anonymous
7/21/20, 2:09 AM
more please !!!
zac
7/21/20, 1:29 AM
Great start! Looking forward to seeing where this goes!
Swizzington
7/21/20, 1:14 AM
I'm a big fan of stories with suits, tuxedos, etc., and this story really pushed my buttons! So thanks for posting. With that being said, I agree with much of what Jon S said. The story is confusing in places, frustratingly lacking important details in others, and has whole segments of seemingly redundant material. Also, some of the paragraphs are unwieldy and could use some breaking up. Still, I enjoyed it and I am very excited for chapter 2! :-) Edit: This was your first story, right? In that case, it's a great first effort, and I'd love to see more from you in future!
Anonymous
7/21/20, 1:10 AM
Oh, wouldnt it just be teeeeerrible if mixing too many oils had the unforseen consequense of making the change permanent. Oh nooo.
DragonKink
7/21/20, 1:06 AM
Many thanks for that reply! I might just borrow some of those ideas. I'll let you know if I do!
7/21/20, 12:26 AM
Oh my!! A five on every rating!! You hit every element perfectly and the story was superb. I am so loving this series.
BostonSatyr
7/21/20, 12:21 AM
SilverStat: are you planning on writing more on this theme. do you have a patreon I can contribute to? would that encourage you? you're a gifted writer and i hope you'll share more chapters.
7/20/20, 11:35 PM
OOOOOHHH SNAP! PERFECT continuation! BRAVO. Hot as FUCK and deliciously complex enough to maintain the story tension. Jake's realization of his utter insignificance when he WANTS Jafar so much now coupled with his open ended wish that they only had to STAY together, not be HAPPY together... UGH, these are the story arcs I live for. Jafar always being with Jake means he can go the total anime route, Jake now possesses Jafar's dick, a spirit of the cock with no autonomy but total sentience. Or he can resign himself to a mortal boy toy turning into his forever partner. Or they can go the sitcom route of one REALLY wanting the luv, and the other half pissed off they're stuck with one another. (this last one kinda seems like it'd suck for everyone though) Perhaps Jafar might decide that the only way to not live in a personal hell this close to his dreams getting fulfilled, means he has to want Jake the way Jake wants Jafar. But that still leaves Majid. I was a little annoyed with the reinsertion of Majid before in the last chapter, he felt a little flat to me, either a half cock tease or a jibbering spazz until Jafar overwrote him, which just made him even MORE one dimensional! But! He might just be Jafar's salvation now. He's Jake's love slave and he can easily be used to wish Jafar free. Unless Majid remembers how dangerous Djinn are, or regains enough semblance of self to wish selfishly. Jafar has been playing with Majid's mind already, what's some more?
7/20/20, 11:13 PM
No!!! i mean Yes!!! ummm??? I don't know how to fell about this...
7/20/20, 10:47 PM
Unf. I loved this idea, and loved the ongoing attraction between Xander and Charlie. More please!