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7/20/20, 9:51 PM
Well done, hot, dirty but also a little tender as well. Another winner for sure!
SionOfMerlin
7/20/20, 9:45 PM
It was a very hard sell to get any attention for our charlie, for that reason, Axon. And yes, expect more HPMOR :D
7/20/20, 9:33 PM
Oh boys! I hope you're going to like the next chapter.
7/20/20, 9:09 PM
Loved this!
7/20/20, 8:48 PM
nice, the plot thickens. I hope this story continues
Nutiper
7/20/20, 8:34 PM
Another possible way to complicate things for Jafar is to have Jake realize how, in their shared fantasy of Jafar being all-powerful, Jake is totally absent from the picture. And he could confront Jafar about it. And if Jafar says something like "why, you'll simply be one of my *many* adoring slaves," Jake could decide that's not good enough for him and wish to be Jafar's favorite. Becoming Jafar's favorite (favorite slave? favorite fucktoy? how would Jafar interrpet this?) wouldn't be all fun and games, since it *is* Jafar. But it could be one way to add an interesting aspect to Jafar's desires while keeping Jake a main character in the story, and still giving Jafar a path to world domination.
7/20/20, 7:49 PM
the difficult thing would be keeping the story from stalling out if Jafar gets too powerful too fast. perhaps one more road block from an ineptly worded wish from Jake (he still has two left) like, Jake loves Jafar, he wants Jafar to rule the world, but he also WANTS Jafar. We've already proven that Jake's hedonism is strong enough to corrupt Jafar's power lust, why not let it happen again? Jake could wish that Jafar could take over the world without wishing for Jafar's freedom, which leaves Jafar nearly all powerful, but still bound to Jake. Now he would just have to convince Jake to make a third wish to free him or when Jake wishes a third time it will send Jafar back to his lamp.
7/20/20, 7:39 PM
LOVE the hypnotizing dick and the innocent way the main character introduces it to his friend. The power bottom bit was great too.
7/20/20, 7:13 PM
To be fair, the mention of Godrick’s Hollow was some very subtle set up about the story being set in the HP verse. Okay, so I have a (non-professional) interest on quantum mechanics, and someone being able to publish a paper about consciousness influencing the wave function collapse in the 21st century kinda breaks my suspension of disbelief. The scientific consensus has been for quite a while that the wave function *doesn't* collapse -- particles are waves, and waves can look fairly similar to particles, with any difference becoming negligible when you zoom out. And a particle being "in two places at once" is a natural consequence of it being a wave -- since waves are by definition spread out in space (and time). However, I believe that something like finding out that consciousness can "jump" branches of the wave function (a.k.a. traveling to an alternate history) would be received with a similar degree of skepticism, but would be something publishable given enough evidence -- even if it'd invalidate most everything we know about quantum mechanics and neuroscience. > ...the can of worms that arise from something James called a “Time turner”. Apparently, P = NP when you can abuse cause and effect. Oh, is that a reference to *Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality*? Nice, very nice.
Anonymous
7/20/20, 7:10 PM
I for one really like the inclusion of older people on the site, it's so rare. I am even considering writing a part as a fellow-up actually, but I prefer some light romantics than humiliation and that detours the main theme of the story :-(