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7/19/20, 10:04 AM
> I feel like maybe Danny might have influenced Mimbo Drops a little too ;) > Actually, that was my buddy Steve -- same basic premise: straight boy that i worked out with (in this case, also my mtn biking buddy), SIGNIFICANTLY bigger cock than Danny ever dreamed of having. Same basic relationship, though Steve is way more laid back, but basically we'd ride, come home, have a shot, smoke a bowl and then a blow job. That went on for years. Danny is Jersey from MILK MAN 2, in his most recognizable form. Jersey even looks like Danny. Otherwise, just his attitude permeates these stories: cocky and oozing sex.
SionOfMerlin
7/19/20, 9:40 AM
Noted, Jon S. There's a lot of residual from changes to pace and style. I can look at fixing some of the issues you have presented.
7/19/20, 7:14 AM
Good lord, I think too much. Anyone want to take a 28 year old, over the top bi guy and turn him into a jock, have at it lol
Johnthedoe
7/19/20, 5:33 AM
It's coming. I've already started adding everything I yanked out trying to make it fit in the space allowed by the challenge back in. Expect an unknown number of chapters sometime in early August after the challenge ends.
7/19/20, 5:19 AM
Really need more of this
Ken
7/19/20, 5:08 AM
WOW!!! A truly amazing story. Loved every bit of it. The highs, the lows...everything. The ending was above perfect. You tied up everything, without any loose threads. Can't wait to read more from you. Thank you for such a great experience.
7/19/20, 4:34 AM
Holy shit Absman, that was incredibly hot, and then you tagged it with a real life straight-ish dude story. I feel like maybe Danny might have influenced Mimbo Drops a little too ;) I also think too much. Weed does the job for me.
Carl
7/19/20, 4:05 AM
Good twisty story and you bringing in your other "good" protagonists from other stories to stop Alex's evil. Few authors like you have written intricate plots like this with erotic fiction, it almost feels like the your "MC" Avengers are assembling to face off against some big bad. About the setup: Rob was smart enough to program a counter command into Paul and he also had used commands on himself from the last story, so it goes to reason that the re-educator cannot affect him. However, with years of experimentation and research, I'd imagine Rob had figured the limits of Megawave-like tech; perhaps enough to extract Jake's true personality out. However, there's also the professor with his own device. A 3-way battle of MC tech would be fun and extremely erotic.
Matt
7/19/20, 2:17 AM
Yeah I'm glad you went with the alternate ending instead of your original one. I ended up loving Mikey so much that it would be a shame to see him disappear from Roger's life. One thing I would've wished you kept was Stacy's reaction to Phil and Roger. I did think that the "canon" version of Stacy's reaction was a little too convenient. I would've felt hurt and betrayed in her position if I found out that my dad ended his marriage with my mom because he fell in love with a person that I was dating in the past.
7/19/20, 2:05 AM
Very nice! Looks like there'll be more to follow up on what happens to Paul. Good start and thumbs up to the Anonymous Author! Looking forward to it!