I was very close to pulling off a Harry Potter or Hunger Games and making this a two part chapter but that's weird to me. If people really are invested or want to read this story, they'll read it regardless. Hopefully it was a nice read for y'all since there is A LOT of time jumps to account for this being the last chapter. In regards to the first draft of the story, this is literally my very rough notes on where I was headed before I re-wrote this chapter to account for the reader suggestions-- it was difficult because in the end, Phil had the most votes in both the previous chapter comment section and in my email. I made an excel sheet to keep tabs of votes and if I were to just account for the votes between Mikey and Phil, Phil won by 10 votes next to Mikey. But then, *dun dun dun* people suggested a threeway relationship and I was like ( o_0 ) so I tried doing the thing, y'know, instead of pretending I didn't see that and people voted that second to Phil + Roger. Here are my notes/idea for the end: _6 months later_ (Not 8 months) more so because it's easier to find a condo than a home with huge garage to repurpose as a small home. Mike came to visit with his fiancée before he and Jeremy wed (Jeremy is the owner of the gym he and Phil began exercising at), to invite us to the wedding. They began dating around the middle of Roger's last year at college. In this version, Phil and Roger didn't have a 2 year radio silence and talked the week after Stacy left. Phil and Roger live together in a nice apartment (instead of a home) that they both rent but will be moving out soon since they decided to take the next step and bought a condo (This one also doesn't have Mikey living with them or Deputy the pupper). They came out to everyone they knew, and at first it was a surprise and a scandal locally but in the end everyone was happy for them... after Stacy cussed them out and shunned them for the past 6 months… but ultimately had to get over it because she did tell her dad to find love again. It’s absolutely gross to her and very awkward for the both Roger and Phil but they got each other. She will eventually get over it and be okay with it but it's a big yikes for her. Phil will ask roger to marry him after they move into the new place and occasionally, asks Roger to put him under, using his favorite pleasure triggers but letting him remember. He loves being used by his future husband and Roger loves pleasing his partner, lover, and future husband.

Please update!!

I love the part Roger and Phil have a dog and a cute relationship in a home with mikey living with them. i could visualize the home and atmosphere. out of curiosity, what was the original ending you had planned for this?

There are always readers who wish the bad guy won -- and then other readers who wish the good guy won. Write what turns you on, and what feels like an exciting next chapter for you!

It's so refreshing reading a story like the one you've accomplished here. It's an amazing gift you have. Thank you so much for this experience and I was extremely happy with the ending you chose. I know a lot of people were demanding for different outcomes, myself included, but I'm very pleased with the outcome. Please keep on writing and I can't wait to read your next story, and I hope sometime down the line you continue Roger's story too. Personal Toy is also a really good read, and I love the coach's character a lot. So I can't wait to see the next chapter.

Do I dare write an ending where the bad guy wins? Do I dare create the ending I wish had happened in the original 1992 film? Who knows?! I'm pretty much making this up as I go!

I’m getting definite hints of that too. I’m loving this so far. This is the hottest chapter, definitely, and I loved the vision of what Jafar wants to do.

Huh, I'm wondering if the desire-transfer worked out the way that Jafar thinks it does. Since the images of Jafar enslaving the world ended up ruining Jake's orgasm for him, it sounds like Jake doesn't actually want it after all... I wonder if Jake could open the mental connection to Jafar and fight back, or edit Jafar's desires in some way. Jafar does seem to underestimate Jake's influence on the link.

phenomenal story I really enjoyed it. excellent use of time-lapse it was a real page-turner.. I can't wait to read more from you! in that scene at the end woohoo!

I'm still exploring this site and I must say, I'm surprised to learn that I love the piss stuff! Really love how twisted and fucked up you made the Stanton's lives. Enjoying this series so far!