Yeah I'm glad you went with the alternate ending instead of your original one. I ended up loving Mikey so much that it would be a shame to see him disappear from Roger's life. One thing I would've wished you kept was Stacy's reaction to Phil and Roger. I did think that the "canon" version of Stacy's reaction was a little too convenient. I would've felt hurt and betrayed in her position if I found out that my dad ended his marriage with my mom because he fell in love with a person that I was dating in the past.

Very nice! Looks like there'll be more to follow up on what happens to Paul. Good start and thumbs up to the Anonymous Author! Looking forward to it!

A good set up for things to come. However, was confusing in a lot of areas. What happened to Charlie's essay or whatever he was accomplished for? Why would he just trot off to a stranger's house over it and why did this Linfriedson person care about it? Who was he anyway? Who was Charlie? Then it suddenly slips into Harry Potter universe with no set up. Don't get me wrong, I'm an HP fan but there was just no warning about it. So, is Charlie a Muggle? Was he a wizard all along? Or is this a Harry Potter situation where he's finding out? (ARRRRGGGHHH!!! Yur a wizard Charlie!) kind of thing? I would like a better description of the house. All that is mentioned is that it is "foreboding" and then nothing. However, once inside it seems very Victorian/Gothic with corridors and studies and dining rooms and such. Also remember, this is Godric's Hollow, a small village. A large, imposing mansion may look out of place there, although every town and city does have a 'richest' person and therefore big house. However... and just an idea here.... what about a two story, lopsided and otherwise normal sized house that is... larger on the inside? Re: the paragraph and part of the story that starts with: “This will do far better”, the lad smiled. He lead me to an exquisite dining room, reminiscent of a modern restaurant, crossed with a traditional dining hall, just smaller. OK, first of all, that's awful. You just spent a looong paragraph describing a tuxedo and clothes fitting but you can't describe a dining room? Either describe the room or don't. An "exquisite dining room" is fine. Or I'll cook something for you (hehe) Moving on, Charlie meets his host. Again, there is no mention of why this guy is such a big shot and no description of what Charlie was researching that was so fascinating. And yet he has Charlie "shrinking in his seat" in intimidation. Again, things are glossed over and things are not clear. Then Charlie is forced to sign a contract that he does not understand nor is it clear what it wants to the audience. He waits for a pen but then has to use a quill and is surprised, so more is he a Muggle or not, confusion. Frankly, if there's not clear intent on what this contract is needed for, this entire paragraph could be cut. The next bit has Charlie introduced to magic which he has never heard of and therefore, again, Muggle? Muggle raised? He has no wand which he should have gotten at age 11. The rest of the story has Charlie being victimized and transformed by magic. Fair enough. He does not defend himself and he is not given a wand to do so but even so, wouldn't a competent wizard have a few potions up his sleeve to defend himself. But nope, Charlie is screwed over, fitted in servant's clothes and K.O ed. The only training he is to receive seems to be transformed into one of those butler boys despite being lured there to discuss his findings in (X) thanks to his PHD in (fill in blank here) There is no mind control. There is no hypnosis or induction. There isn't even a unforgivable curse (the mind control one) This didn't seem to be a important theme in the set up or story. Otherwise a good piece of suit and tie porn Grammar Nazi alert: There are a few places where the tense shifts back to 3rd person, Charlie sat... Charlie said... etc

agree with nupiter that Jake doesn't seem all that down with the world domination. That can make for an interesting dynamic, does he grow more and more on board with the idea? Does Jafar get less interested? Personally I hope that Jafar stays interested in world domination and Jake makes another poorly worded wish that blurs his own autonomy a bit more while muddying Jafar's original intentions a bit too. The chapter title is perfect for me even if it's not yet quite accurate. if Jake were to wish for something like, "I wish you wanted to make the world better." And Jafar decided that in essence he already did so he 'granted' the wish by slightly altering Jake's mind to add Jafar as the most perfect leader for the world. And since he and Jake share a mind he finds himself saving endangered species and undoing pollution as he gets to a more global influence, if he ever gets there. Of course because I love bad guy wins as much as i love good guy wins, I also think it would be so hot if Jake wished that Jafar didn't need anything other than him to be happy. Jafar can tackle that in two ways, he can unwillingly revert to the perfect boyfriend, or he can forcefully transfer his world domination aspirations directly into Jake's psyche so Jafar would be happy with Jake and Jake would want nothing more than releasing his genie boyfriend on the world. Seeing as how Jake would still want Jafar to be domineering and forceful it would make for an interesting dynamic. Alternately (yes i know these are a lot of options but you weren't the only one that wished the movie had ended differently) Jafar can use his normal mind control tactics to trick Jake to wish them back to Agrabah the night he was defeated. while the whole palace is sleeping he can weave a spell over the city so everyone wakes up thinking it is utterly normal for Jafar to be their eternal genie sultan. (this was attempted by Mechanicles in the TV show but he used a purely non magical solution which genie and carpet were immune to it and later episodes show both Genie and carpet as vulnerable to other magics such as the mood stones. Wow, I just referenced the show...) if you can't tell, I am a huge fan of this story and don't care where you take it, I will be pleased for you to continue.

Very hot. Thanks!

Please continue this. Wanna see what Jafar's utopia looks like. And Jake still has two wishes left so interested to see what those will be. Unless Jafar changes the rules and gives him more to more fully extend his power over our weak little world.

This is heading in a great direction. Looking forward to the next part!

I was very close to pulling off a Harry Potter or Hunger Games and making this a two part chapter but that's weird to me. If people really are invested or want to read this story, they'll read it regardless. Hopefully it was a nice read for y'all since there is A LOT of time jumps to account for this being the last chapter. In regards to the first draft of the story, this is literally my very rough notes on where I was headed before I re-wrote this chapter to account for the reader suggestions-- it was difficult because in the end, Phil had the most votes in both the previous chapter comment section and in my email. I made an excel sheet to keep tabs of votes and if I were to just account for the votes between Mikey and Phil, Phil won by 10 votes next to Mikey. But then, *dun dun dun* people suggested a threeway relationship and I was like ( o_0 ) so I tried doing the thing, y'know, instead of pretending I didn't see that and people voted that second to Phil + Roger. Here are my notes/idea for the end: _6 months later_ (Not 8 months) more so because it's easier to find a condo than a home with huge garage to repurpose as a small home. Mike came to visit with his fiancée before he and Jeremy wed (Jeremy is the owner of the gym he and Phil began exercising at), to invite us to the wedding. They began dating around the middle of Roger's last year at college. In this version, Phil and Roger didn't have a 2 year radio silence and talked the week after Stacy left. Phil and Roger live together in a nice apartment (instead of a home) that they both rent but will be moving out soon since they decided to take the next step and bought a condo (This one also doesn't have Mikey living with them or Deputy the pupper). They came out to everyone they knew, and at first it was a surprise and a scandal locally but in the end everyone was happy for them... after Stacy cussed them out and shunned them for the past 6 months… but ultimately had to get over it because she did tell her dad to find love again. It’s absolutely gross to her and very awkward for the both Roger and Phil but they got each other. She will eventually get over it and be okay with it but it's a big yikes for her. Phil will ask roger to marry him after they move into the new place and occasionally, asks Roger to put him under, using his favorite pleasure triggers but letting him remember. He loves being used by his future husband and Roger loves pleasing his partner, lover, and future husband.

Please update!!

I love the part Roger and Phil have a dog and a cute relationship in a home with mikey living with them. i could visualize the home and atmosphere. out of curiosity, what was the original ending you had planned for this?