Recent Comments

7/18/20, 6:29 PM
Absolutely true. For a long time, I didn't think I'd ever have a boyfriend, just an endless chain of "straight" boys who liked the sex but not the responsibility. In retrospect, I've had a lot of really great sex with a lot of really amazing guys! To think, when I was a kid, I used to hate myself for my sexual orientation, now I recognize it as one of the greatest gifts I could have.
Nutiper
7/18/20, 5:58 PM
Whew. I read Apollyon years back, and have been enjoying this chapter-by-chapter reposting, but hearing this extra, real-life detail about Danny, and how that experience influenced your fiction... just, whew!! What a hot origin story.
Desi
7/18/20, 5:28 PM
Such a pleasant and heart warming finale. I'm so happy that you decided to keep both men in Roger's life. I'm so glad that Mikey didn't give the same amount of crap as Phil did when he found out about the mind control stuff, he really is just the best. I did kinda agree with what other comments were saying about Stacy being okay with the situation. I know you had that line there suggesting that she's faking it, but still.... it didn't feel enough of a reaction for the situation. But its okay, it didn't ruin it for me and I don't really have a better solution for it so I guess you did the best you could. Overall, you did a great job and I'm well satisfied with this!
7/18/20, 5:20 PM
Loved the mix of hotness and humor in this story. Fantastic!
Btm
7/18/20, 5:16 PM
Never trust someone named Larkin!
Shadow Reader
7/18/20, 4:38 PM
I agree with one of the above comments about Stacy being okay with Roger and Phil, I just don't see her (or anyone) being okay with your Ex dating your dad. But yeah, I do appreciate that you did your best to end this story as well as you could and I thought you mostly did a good job. There were some good moments, like Mikey's reconciliation, Stacy's life in London and Roger's journey getting his degree. Job well done on a good ending!
7/18/20, 4:21 PM
I've always found this series to be hot, and enjoyed this addition. I look forward to what comes next.
Anonymous
7/18/20, 3:33 PM
i like it but please describe the actual changes in the body a little bit more rather than a blink and done transition maybe?
7/18/20, 2:52 PM
truly enjoyed this on many different levels. thank you!
Jul 18, 2020
7/18/20, 2:13 PM
This was an enjoyable take on the vampire genre and well-written. Thank you!