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7/18/20, 2:46 AM
Whoops, deleted my comment instead of editing. I just sent the new chapter in. It's the longest chapter I have ever typed. Consider it a two part chapter in one or a two hour special from a good ass T.V. show. I really liked it and again, thank you for the great comments for this series.
Leo
7/18/20, 2:16 AM
Omg I can’t wait!! Thank you for listening to your readers! I hope we get a finale that pleases both sides. You’re literally the only reason I visit this site! Your writing is so freaking good! <3 Please keep writing stories about young dudes controlling daddies it’s so hot!!
7/18/20, 1:14 AM
Please continue!
7/18/20, 1:07 AM
Not too long of a wait, but then a lot of tease again. Well done, sir, keeping me hooked, waiting to see where this goes. Also, more seriously, great descriptions of Jafar’s body. Very hot.
7/18/20, 12:12 AM
One of the best-written stories on here, kudos!! It just *flows*. Super sexy premise, hot writing and I love the will-they-won't-they you set up with Charlie and Xander. Hope we get to see where it takes them. Thanks for posting!
Anonymous
7/17/20, 10:00 PM
I liked this story. The musk element was very hot.
7/17/20, 9:01 PM
Fuckin awesome.
Anonymous
7/17/20, 8:47 PM
This was hot! i can't wait to see what happens next
Sep 7, 2014
boi98229
7/17/20, 8:38 PM
i love this story! Normally i like to have a longer description of the process of establishing mind control, but this felt very real if a little supernatural, and while it happened very quickly, the way the eye contact was made and the initial trance deepened was very hot. i feel like i just accepted the job, but will never get to start work! i'll hope against fear that there will be a new chapter!!
7/17/20, 8:19 PM
Oh, so that would be your wish, would it?