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Anonymous
7/17/20, 4:21 PM
That a very good story, can't wait for more
Masters boy please ca
7/17/20, 3:38 PM
please im your fan i adore this story wish I was that lad ive fantasized bout this please do a sequel please thank you
7/17/20, 2:29 PM
PLEASE nail these tiktok boys into a deep abyss of hypno-slavery! god, the sheer amount of pretentious attitude and barely veiled queer baiting... let Jeremiah have his fun, theres nothing wrong with a good revenge fic.
Anonymous
7/17/20, 1:54 PM
It's the subtle transformation. He doesn't even remember that he was straight, he doesn't even realize that he's wearing a thong. The overtaking was so complete for the lead character and his friends. Loved it! Was so hot!!!
7/17/20, 1:29 PM
This is a great first chapter. Great imagery and descriptions and a great job not forcing the reader to live through all of the narrator’s argument with his now ex. It’s also a huge tease :) I hope you have the next chapter almost ready to go. I want to read some wishes and mass enslavement :)
7/17/20, 12:55 PM
Every chaoter more and more mesmerizingly HOT! I'd sing in myself for that gym.....NOW
7/17/20, 12:44 PM
I also want to note how well you use sensory image in this chapter to evoke the harsh desert setting, the thrill of the Jeep safari, and the mysterious qualities of the black lamp. It adds drama, tension, and texture to a story that begins in lockdown Britain and continues in mirage-like Dubai.
7/17/20, 12:40 PM
The title of the story, a quotation of Majid's words to the narrator, is particularly intriguing. Likewise, this musing on the part of the narrator definitely caught my eye as possible foreshadowing: > "Whilst a small part of me mourned the lack of potential to have a night of wild sex with this handsome Arabian hunk, a rational part of me realised the low potential for this, even if he had been gay, due to my totally average appearance." I am particularly interested in the dynamic between the narrator and Majid, even more so with the involvement of the genie Jafar. This is a great setup for future chapters. Awesome work!
7/17/20, 12:18 PM
What an incredibly hot story. I love the way the ring makes the men want it more and more, and the suggestion that the love and desire it brings out in the men leaves a trace that gets stronger and stronger.
7/17/20, 12:17 PM
I loved it but again not much in reality change. Could have fun and torment someone by making dramatic changes. I like Max is aware but more could have been done with it.